That was so sweet

Gorgeous imagery. If this were a painting, it would be one of those that pops out at you as if it's 3D. If it were a photograph... it would be one that you can't look away from despite the tears in your eyes.

I must say, this is wonderful. The way you write is just so... honest. I can appreciate that. I like how each little blurb is about sex, but the way you write it makes it seem so much deeper. Great job!

Wow! Awesome again. You're really talented!

You are so mean to Amy. I don't know why that's making me empathise with her, but I love that it is. I think one of the best things about your stories is that you write about actual bad things happening to people without over-emphasising it, rather than drama-drama-drama that doesn't mean anything. Both the other fragments were lovely to read, and Colin was so sweet with Ephram, but Amy is sticking with me. Colin is so careless and detached -- this is very discomfiting. You know, in that good way.

Oh. BAD Colin!

*gasps* The little **! Oh well, at least everyone's gettin' some. No discrimination there. Seriously though, where would I go to read slash without you?! Great fic!

Oh yeah, I think you should write melly into your next fic. I ashamed to even have a name that rhyme's with melly. Absolutely no maturity in that one, eh?!

i just wanted to let you know that i think that this story is absolutely disgusting..you really should do something more with your time