 Utenarose 2007-05-01 . chapter 6Hola!
Perdona por escribir en español, pero sé poco inglés, hehe. Perdona también por escribir este review tan tarde, pero es que soy una despistada y me cuesta encontrar buenas historias.
Tu fanfic es genial y deberías continuarlo. Me gusta mucho el romance Arc-Kukuru y hay muy pocas historias sobre eso. De verdad, es increíble como desarrollas la historia, continuala.
Ánimos de tu lectora española ;-)
Utenarose |
 Arakasema 2005-08-08 . chapter 6It really is flowing excellently so far. I wish that more people wopuld review your stroy, though. This story really does deserve it. :-) |
 Arakasema 2005-07-26 . chapter 4Wow. You update really fast, I'm only 3/4 of the way through chapter 4. I'll be sure to review once I'm done with both chapters. =)
It's really great so far. =D |
 theatre-kun 2005-06-03 . chapter 3I'm HERE! So sorry! This is theatre-sama who has changed his name. I've been really busy and you write so detailingly it long it took me a while to read it (I'm not saying that's a bad thing. I promise, I love the way you write!)
What I really love about your story is the very intricate plot that you are slowly putting together, but it is such a large puzzle I can't say I can explain what I think is going to happen next.
There are so many different possiblilities that I can not attempt to comprehend what you have set up. It makes me think of a really good book that I would love to read, your story does. A good example of something I didn't expect was the weakening of their powers. Clive is also turning out to be an interesting character himself...I have to wonder what he could want with Kukuru, and what he could have against Arc. Arc never did anything to Clive...hm, I shall see. |
 Salacassera 2005-06-01 . chapter 3This chapter was worth waiting for. Clive's interesting, and I love how you write Chongara :) |
 theatre-kun 2005-03-10 . chapter 1*sweatdrop* yeah, I know that there is almost zich of a hope for you to update. You haven't updated this fic in almost two years...so yeah...
I relly must say that you set up a very good story line, and the way you write it just truly amazes me. Thank you. |
 Holy white 2004-05-20 . chapter 2 I really like this, i really do like this, I hope you update soon! I want to find out what happens next! |
 Gaurdian Rowen 2004-02-18 . chapter 2Very well done. I enjoyed your story. There isn't enough ATL Fanfiction out there. ^__^ |
 Salacassera 2003-11-09 . chapter 1Great story :) I haven't finished it yet, but I just wanted to let you know that I really like what I've seen so far. You write the characters very well. |
 Fire Champion 2003-07-25 . chapter 1An interesting story of an AU. Your story should have more reviews, but aside that I really liked it. Hopefully more people will write Arc The Lad. |