Two words:

Kick **.

It really is rare to find Will-fic, and it's ever a treat to find something about him as wonderful, insightful, and down-right scary at this piece.

Ouch. I wonder if my wonderful Will will ever have, I don't know... like a happy story. :D Fantastic fic.

wow, i really liked the perspective and i loved the ending, wow, the only thing i would change is your summary, you don't say will for the whole story, if your trying to make somewhat of a surprise out of it then don't put the name will in the summary

We! Willage! Gotta love the Willage. I was pleasantly suprised when I read this. Not because I was surprised that you could write such a great fic, which I always knew you could, but because you made poor, widdle, Willage sympathetic. I could feel Will's feelings. I could sympathize and understand what he was going through. You wrote some really powerful angst.

This was a great story, and you did the characters of Will and Fauxlio justice. Bravo!! I can't wait to read more of your stuff. *cough*Perfect Place*cough*. Oh, and thank you very much for plugging me. It was my pleasure to help you out. You are a great writer, just like you tell me, and I hope you never stop. And people, please read more of this wonderful writer's work. Please!