very good! usually, i find that h/h supporters always tend to bash ron and portray him as an insensitive git or a jealous prat. i'm glad that you didn't do that in this story. you made it seem like he had grown up, which is good. pleaze continue or write a sequel, because this story really is good! :D

it was really a good story from ron's pov. your words have an effect on me. it made me feel like crying at times while reading it.

That i so incredibly cute!! It is really sad to though! Good job!! I like it

gotta love your writing style...

Lots of emotion... I like it...

This was a beautiful story keep going.

Alex

Nice job, keep it up!