very well written :) - you were able to convey merry's feelings very well. so much emotion even in the smallest, shortest lines. long live the king of rohan!
Aw... that was SO sweet, thank you for writing it! I love Merry and that's an awesome insight to his character and I'm babbling now so I'm gonna go. Keep up the good work!
*gulp* I don't always remember how much Merry looked up to Theoden, but this has reminded me; I think you've summed up his feelings beautifully - they never did have enough time together, meeting as they did in time of war. There's a definite sense of loss and of what might have been in your poem. Lovely.
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