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abiak 2007-08-16 . chapter 1
very great story, setos answers were very clever and honest keep the good work about seto and mokuba
hatandkill-D 2006-06-15 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! I loved it!
Dark Artemis and JonnyX 2006-01-26 . chapter 1
Kawaii! You are such a good writer!
-DA
Afiong Bassey 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
Aw how sweet. QAq brotherly talk between seto and mokuba.
PeachToadstool4463 2005-04-20 . chapter 1
Great job! I love Seto/Moki fluffs, they're just all so CUTE! My favorite part was the end, because Mokuba looks simply adorable when he's sleeping under Seto's trenchy(like in the one episode). Keep up the good work!!
Lovely-Sorrow-23 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
Emmy: Aw that's so sweet! :) I gave me that warm fuzzy feeling!
Caorann fridh Bronach 2005-04-18 . chapter 1
Holy moly (does anyone still use that phrase?)! I swear I reviewed this! I'm so sorry; this had been under my favorites forever until I started storing Seto/Mokuba fics in the C2 community.
I love it! That simple line that Kaiba says to Mokuba on why he wasn't adopted was great. So natural and so touching at the same time.
The emotion you make is tense, and when you relieve that, I feel like just sitting and smiling at my computer for awhile.
The ending, of course, where Seto tells Mokuba he would do it all the same again was really moving. These two are so great!
I can also visualize the ending...I love that part on the blimp when Mokuba is covered in Seto's coat.
Great story! And again, sorry I didn't review sooner!
Nachzes Black-Rider 2004-12-24 . chapter 1
Lieh: Sweet. I like it. Pretty well-written, too. Thanks for the review on 'In My Heart'. Nachzes appretiates it, right, Nachzes?

Nachzes: Mr [bats computer screen with one paw]

Lieh: I think that's a yes... Anyways, just wanted to say thanks for that review. I--well, we--like reviews. Yes.

Nachzes: [purrs]

Lieh: *Ahem*, well, nice to see that someone thinks that the lyrics go well with the scenes. I think it went all good until the last couple bits. Nachzes sortta ran out of ideas...heh, heh. Stick around for the X-tended version, man; it's gonna have a whole lotta X-tended scenes. [grins]
Garowyn 2004-10-04 . chapter 1
You know, I thought I had already read and reviewed this. Hmm...well anyway, nice job. Very cute!
The Wingless Angel 2004-09-05 . chapter 1
Aw...*sniff* That was beautiful! ^.^

~Super-Veggie-San
Misura 2004-06-11 . chapter 1
They're so cute together! :) Especially Mokuba, though Seto is cutie in this as well, in his own way. I esecially liked Seto's remark about how people didn't really want to adopt *him*, as a person, but rather his skills and talents. And that cute ending-scene. :)
MilleniumGirl 2004-06-07 . chapter 1
WHY HAVEN'T I ALREADY REVIEWED THIS? Well, anyway, I thought it was wonderful! ^__^ *does happy *I'm-a-Kaiba-brothers-fluff-sap dance* So sweet!
Mitsuno Miya 2004-05-26 . chapter 1
So...painfully...cute. ;.; *cuddles her Mokuba to BITS!!* ;_;
Mokuba-chan 2004-01-07 . chapter 1
I love reading stories about Seto and Mokuba! Great story ^^
HiKari Mokuba's Guardian 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
Really, really, cute! Write more!
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