Reviews for An Accidental Odyssey

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colleen 2007-03-10 ch 8, anon.	abuseOH MAN AM I GOOD! I have no idea why but I knew Greg wasn't driving the car by chapter 2. I swear to god I have ESP. Well anyway...I LOVE THIS STORY! Woo Hoo. Good job!
AndAct 2006-10-18 ch 13, anon.	abuse... Oh my goodness... I am compleatly speechles, your story was so amazingly, so awsomly good. I hope you write profesionaly, because the industry needs someone with your skill. The character diolog was so spot on to how they are on tv, and the bad wagon line was brilliant. I defiantly didnt think greg wasnt driving, never even crossed my mind it could be sarah, so that little twist left me reeling. I also loved that he (Greg) actualy left in the end, you really folowed through. As an actor, i get to read alot of scrips, alot of sides, and let me tell you; i know good writting when i see it. Yours is top notch. I hope you continue to write, AndAct
HelenLouise 2006-02-15 ch 13,	abuseOkay, so maybe I'm going for some kind of a record here - submitting a review some 3 years down the line! But I just have to say how incredible this story is. I've just stumbled across it and have been unable to tear myself away from the computer until I'd finished it! It's just so emotional, so wonderfully written and so damned, damned sad. Thank you, you've given me a wonderful afternoon's entertainment. Kindest regards, Helen
Moose Wizard 2006-01-30 ch 1,	abuseOh! I never got to tell you this is one of my favorite CSI stories! ^^ (I'm on a mission to comment on every story I really really liked, and this one just stuck out! :D) Thank you for this! ^^
Lynn 2005-09-21 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow, wow, wow! It's the only thing that comes to my mind. This fic was really good, but the end...OMG! Splendid! It broke my heart, and yeah, raelly that was wonderfully sad! Really good job, you've done here, congrats! Bises
... 2005-07-10 ch 13, anon.	abuseplease tell me that wasn't it! Add more to the story.
Kelly 2005-05-04 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow! long pause I just read this and I don't know what to say. This is one of the saddest, let me tell you. You have got to write a sequel and bring Greg back. I am still stunned. But great job with words, that was amazing!
Grrlnorth 2005-03-31 ch 13,	abuseWhat an interesting and well-written story. I'm very impressed, and I really enjoyed reading it. I even like the way you ended it, it was very authentic and true to the story. Of course I say that knowing that you have started a sequel, because I do feel that there is more of the story to be told. I'm looking forward to reading it.
Acacia Jules 2004-09-29 ch 10,	abuseI am MAJORLY confused about your sudden change of opinion or feelings, ie, characterization of Nick. I mean, one minute he's supporting Greg, or trying to, no matter what. Then because Greg resisted it so hard, even though Nick really tried to talk to him, and they got in a fight (cause Greg was being an ** frankly), and no matter what Nick tried to do to talk to Greg, he was having non of it. So how was Nick only suddenly jumping on the 'bandwagon' as you put it at the end? That makes no sense. That is no continuation of your own storyline. That's just one major plothole. How can you miss something major like that?! Oh, and THEN there's absolutely no closure between Nick and Greg (even though they were supposedly best friends) at the end. Ugh! Again, plot hole, and it's just so annoying.
Room304 2004-09-26 ch 13,	abuseOk, so you decided to write a sequal to this after I had been waiting for months. The first chapter of it was perfect. I kept waiting for an update, and then, months later when I come back to check, it's gone. Without any reason whatsoever. This was still my favorite CSI story (and it's been over a year since it ended), but when you go and do something like that it kind of ruins it, you know? Because it will always be unfinshed.
Greggy 2004-08-03 ch 13, anon.	abuseNo, you cant make greg go, i'm crying my eyes out, write a sequel, sniff,sniff Its a sad ending but a super good story sniff, sniff write a sequel NOW
Duckie24 2004-05-20 ch 13,	abuseOh my god! I didn't even realize you had finished this story for the longest time! But I can't believe it's over! And Greg's gone? I need a sequel and he needs to come back. But as sad as I am that he's gone, it doesn't make me mad. It seems logical considering how everybody treated him. His emotions seemed, well, human. Good job. I hope you write more CSI soon!
Sandy Morrow 2004-04-12 ch 13, anon.	abuseNo, No no, you can't leave it like this. This story demands a sequel, where everyone flies out to Tampa and drags Greg back to Vegas where he belongs. Please you can't leave it like this. By the way, this is an excellant story. Just the best one that I have read latelly.
Rae 2004-04-06 ch 13, anon.	abusePlease write a sequal! It would be great! This is such a good story! Okay... idea for a sequal, Greg comes back to L.V. but before he can see the CSI's he becomes a case for them, like assult or something! Please write a sequal about when Greggy poocomes back, with what ever plot!
SammieCSIMiami 2004-03-09 ch 13,	abuseyou should have a tissue alert on this story

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