Ah, just a touch of angst.. I liked it!

Aw... omg, that's so sweet... it was so cute! I loved the image of HIsoka just ... 'pretending' to read his book as he plays with Tsuzuki's hair.How sweet... gosh, i love your writing... so sweet and slow... and an indifinite ending to the emotions, like it's left hanging there and unresolved, and that's part of the melancholy. ... it's... inspiring to say the least.

It was most enjoyable!

Ah, so much said in so few words...the subtle words and actions are the ones that scream so much.

And again, I don't really know why I can't help but place myself in Tsuzuki's shoes in your stories...**contented sigh**

Ooh. ;__; This one is so sad. Love it anyway!

What a well written story! That was amazing. very cool. keep up with the great writing^^

hi! you're story is really great... i mean it! in those short sentences and in every word you put in, you've really expressed your feelings... i can't wait to read more of your stories... infact i'm putting you on my fave authors... =) ja ne!
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ei...my gosh..that was so god...i cried at the last line..really...my gosh... you should write more...oww... even the ending is sad, its so nice... but..maybe you could continue the story..like hisoka sudenly follows him and falls to his embrace and he might even kiss him hard..like that..its only a suggestion... hik.. keep up the good work!

0.0 ...that was *really* good... *goes to read other fics... and realizes that she's already read your only other YnM one...* ~_~ ...*not* fair...

Your descriptions were so good, I was caught in the story for every second I read it; it was really amazing. *goes to save a copy on her harddrive*

You should write more when you get the chance. I look foreward to reading any future Yami no Matsuei fics you write!

Gambatte, ne?
-S.K.-chan

This turned me to goo. Excellent Tsuzuki naration, and there is just enough tension between him and Hisoka. I loved it.

I couldn't think of a better way to describe their relationship. This is a wonderful fic, very touching too. Their feelings were put into words perfectly. ^-^

A fascinating look at Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship! You did a great job with this!

Sigh. I don't really know how to describe this. The longing, the hesitancy, the lack of absolutes... everything. You managed to capture them all so well in one short piece. I almost missed seeing it end.

It was simply... an amazing piece of work.

Your way with words is astounding. I could feel the tension here. Indecision is hard to put in words without getting repetitive, but you managed. Looking for more from you!

that was so cute I hope you'll update soon I'll be waiting impatiently