Dost my eyes decive me? A Shrine Knight fanfic writer who spelled Kletian's last name right? I can hardly believe my eyes! Please more. Even though you probably won't because this hasn't been updated in about 2 years but if you have the time...

I think this stroy was... Hey come back here you stupid angle stop walking away now where was I oh yeah it sucks bye

Oh wait a minute this is a fic about the SHRINE KNIGHTS. I guess Balk is going to appear.

This is good. Now we need a story about Balk.

When Angels Walk Away is very well written, with almost no punctuation, spelling or grammar errors.
It wouldn't hurt to make a few of the passages more detailed and vivid. Nonetheless, this is a very solid job of fleshing out a couple of characters who were woefully lacking in personality in FF Tactics itself.

Pink! XD

"Not much of a writer."

Far cry better than a lot of the crap we get on FF.Net, fella. Clear, concise, well-paced storytelling, and a very solid setting and characters you've got, too.

It's been a long time since i played the game, never finished it, and i haven't much of an impression of Rofel and Kletian at all, but i gather that after this, i will.

we i like this a lot! ignore the ignorant flamer. i really want to see this continued ^^

this is very good. I never thought that Rofel was much older than Kletain, but then again Kletain looked young in the game. Is Rofel undead yet, or is he dabbling in the arts of it?

"Just a random nobody" is more like it. Loser.

Good job, Darth Tasuki. You've done what very few make me do nowadays- make me look at a character in a new light. With a subtle line like "the same sword he'd pulled from his father's back", you added layers to Rofel's character. Excellent read- write again sometime.

Wow. Heh. That was good stuff! I hope you wirte more...Darth Tasuki, (like FY don't we?) Please update soon!

WRITE MORE NOW, TASUKI. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

I love it. ^_^

I rarely review, even with something is great, but I thought that this was one of the better things on this site. Correct spelling/grammar automatically make a fic good in my book, as there are so many out there that ** me off with sentences such as "Their, was rain falling" or "They had left there stuff over there."

However, despite the fact that this is a good fic, that isn't why I reviewed. To anonymously review, and to flame, no less, is the height of cowardice. I would like to see anything you've written "Just Somebody," and I'll tell you whether or not it's a piece of crap. As it stands, you're nothing but a coward, and quite wrong to boot.

I hope you'll continue, as it has the makings of a good fic.

sorry, I hate to say it, but that was the BIGGEST piece of crap I have ever read in my life! if I were you, I wouldn't bother to continue with it

Hey! This is nice! Is Kletian really that happy in the game? Oh well...