I have to admit, there was really no real idea of what the hell was going on. It seemed like a Ranma/Nabiki story, which then suddenly switches gears and does something completely un.. well, unlike the story had been building up to. I just didn't get it. Sex-crazed girl, maybe there was too much for my brain to process this early in the morning with this little sleep.

I'll review this later in a message to you.

JustWriter

I have to say that while I enjoyed your portrayal of Nabiki's character, going over the beginning of the series really reminds me of how pathetic Ranma was for not escalating to crippling moves against the panda since it had at least three times Genma's original muscle mass. How could someone continue to make such an elementary mistake? Oh well, I loved your story and would definitely recommend it to others. Can't remember the exact author of this remark. "Character is what you are in the dark."

bo pile of rotting festering fermenting smelly stinky oozing CRAP!

Great story! Update soon!

Kasumi was genuinely pleased for imoutosan. “Here’s a situation where your violence will solve everything!

Good story...with the exception of ONE part! Ranma, or ANY man on earth for that matter, wouldn't pass up the chance fore constant SEX for AKANE! LOL, jeez, you gotta fix that in a future chapter!
gotta run,
Kevin

Not the best thing I ever read, but it was entertaining. And a veritable gem compared to you're other stuff.

Please write more... But tone it down a bit. i liked it but the mention that she's wet every ten seconds isnt needed. maybe as she goes on if ranma keeps rejecting her shemight cry and that would show real emotion and change his mind. as I said please write more!;)

Wow. A story that actually stays true to what I consider to be the "original" Nabiki. Congrats! I'd like to see more of this story developed, and preferably further in the engagement. Imagine how Romeo and Juliet would be if Nabiki somehow found herself in the play...

Nabiki the boy-crazy. OK, that's good; I've seen it for Kasumi the Nymphomaniac and Akane the pervert, so it's about time the middle child gets the treatment. However, I thought it went over the top at the end, given the comparatively low-key beginning. Nabiki isn't just boy-crazy, she's ... Perhaps most importantly, she seemed to act a
little too quickly, given her relative inexperience.

Oh well. It was well-written, and definitely amusing. Kudos!

LOL Evil!