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LupinandHarry 2008-02-10 . chapter 5
Aw poor Ephram. Once again a very good story, i love your writing style to bits!!
Andy4ita 2005-06-21 . chapter 5
Awesome! Please UPDATE!
Adrienne 2004-09-19 . chapter 5
Awesome story! I love all of ur other stories to. And LiL Blondie...go to hell
claramel 2004-07-20 . chapter 5
Great story! I liked how Andy thought that he had been shot when he saw the blood. I love all of your stories, I am slowly working my way through all of them, but I can't stop myself, they are so good, and extremely addicting.
Gnome 90 2003-11-23 . chapter 5
This is a really kewl story. you've probably written loads more that i have'nt got to yet but im getting there. Keep on writing.
Gnome 90
Drama_Duchess 2003-07-26 . chapter 5
This comment is in reply to LiL BLoNdiE's review below of Supermarket Madness (I would email you but your bio page does not list your email address). You may voice your opinion, but I would appreciate it if you did not use profanity when writing a review to my stories. After all, the authors and readers of the E'wood fanfic community here treat each other with the utmost respect. If you didn't enjoy the story, then just say you didn't enjoy it or don't bother writing a review. I truly understand that this story may not appeal to everyone and I don't expect EVERYONE to love it. That is just a gamble writers have to take if they decide to post a story on this site.

I appreciate you pointing out the few spelling errors and as with all writers, when you're typing 300 words a minute, there are bound to be some typos. I do apologize for ALL the typos that were ACCIDENTALLY made throughout the piece. After all, no one is perfect. Not even you. It's really quite amusing that someone would be reading my story for the sole purpose of catching all my typos!! That's really a first. And I thought people read my work because of the content. Silly me. Though, if spelling was the only thing you found wrong with the story, then I think you totally missed the whole meaning of the story!!
LiL bLoNdiE 2003-07-26 . chapter 5
ear- splitting headache
AN EAR-SPLITTING HEADACHE?! wat the f*ck is that?!

and please it is not spelled "thru"
Zack 2003-07-14 . chapter 5
Wow...You have a great imagination..
cool 2003-06-21 . chapter 5
I love all your stories but this is one of my personal favourites. Anyways. Keep writting stories. Your really good at it. I also read when your not strong and its continuation story. They were great to. Your awsome. Keep up the good work.
Coolio02 2003-04-23 . chapter 1
You did a good job on this story!:)
Lil Miss Shortcake 2003-04-08 . chapter 5
Hey! Boy this Ephram kid really has no luck huh. I think my favorite chapter was chapter 4. It brought out emotions. And as always, you're good with details and descriptions.
Roman Tragique 2003-04-07 . chapter 5
D'aw. That was good n.n
Jenny 2003-04-06 . chapter 5
Wow. Wow, just wow. I have loved both your stories so far. They are amazing! I love how you focus on Andy and Ephram and not on Amy and Ephram. Its a nice change from all the stories here and you write them beautifully! I cannot wait to read more of your stories. Please keep them coming:)!!
troubletwinintx 2003-04-06 . chapter 5
Remind me to never go to the grocery store again.

So how do you know when you're having a bad day? Lets me see here - if the first thing that happens to you in the morning is getting hit in the head with a gun and the second thing that happens is getting shot in the chest - you might be having a bad day.

Poor Ephram, at this rate it would be his luck he would fall out of the wheelchair when it's time to go home and break his ankle.

You're on a great roll. Another good story.
ace9 2003-04-06 . chapter 3
Poor Ephram! Great story, Can't wait to find out what happens!!
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