I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Nice. Hurry and post the next chap soon yea?

please update, *puppy eyes*

great! can't wait 4 the future chaps! if its tru ur a 1st x writer, or just a 1st x hp writer, it is asum! i wudnt beleve its ur 1st story. if ur not either tho, it is STILL asum!

ttyl,

-a fan

Love the story plot.

CREEPY RAPIST DUDES !!
IM FREAKED OUT !!

Very nicly written, love.

Kepp up the fantabulous work :)

M !!

Come on continue writing i love the story. I'm gonna cry if you dont update. I wanna new chappie. I'll give you sweeties, I got chocolates. Come on you know you want chocolate.
*Gives Paprika a big square of chocolate*

And i still love the story.

Luv the story agn and sorry if i may be annoying you. Oh and don't finish up so soon. Keep writing more and more. HEEHEE( i just didn't want to LOL)

I luv the story still. I really liked the water fight. So awsome is your story. Gimme your email and i'll email you the poem i wrote it is called the darlord. wooh oohh. LOL!

The three eyes belong to?
oh well doesn't matter i'll find out by that time. oh and by the way tell me if you have yahoo/msn.i wanna add you to my messenger. THe story is really coming along, by the way.

Draco is SIRIUS' SON. YOU HAVE TO BE KIDDING! Anyway thts cool. :)

I luv your story. it is awsome. and lemme guess...the arm belongs to draco. a bit obviouus, don't you think? Anyway, continue writing and if the story is not complete inform me as to when the next chapter is up. Thanx!!

That is a great story. You should send it to WB once your done with it. Tone a few things down and it would be a great movie. Maybe NC-17 but a great movie.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
AH
* SLAPS HERSELF*
Ok I'm done.

Great I've got to finish reading it. But my sister won't stop anoying me. Either way keep up the food work.