I nearly cried reading the ending of this story. I truly did. It was so beautifully written--and the ending so carefully crafted. I felt like I was reading an account--a true account--of lovers somewhere, at some time.
Thank you for the wonderful story. It is the perfect thing to send me off to sleep for the evening with a smile on my face.
God Bless and keep you,
Rebecca Rushton

what a truly awesome story - I know you wrote it years ago, but I've just recently discovered this wonderful fanfiction site - and must say your writing was extremely good - I look forward to finding other things you have done -

It was a wonderful story. I was actually in tears by Chapter 6! I'm not exaggerating..
Thank you for the great story! :)

OMG! Wow! that story was so romantic...so touching...it made me cry! Please, please try to write a sequel

a desert actually has a fountain pen?? ardeth must have got it from rick...

this is so interesting! who would thought that pieces of paper could go for some time travelling!


wow! a letter from future!

Wow. I was impressed with this story. I've only recently watched Mummy and Mummy Returns, but Ardeth is definitely my favorite character. Your story was not only entertaining and fascinating, but it was well written. :-D

Oh my goodness!! This was wonderful! So romantic. Another great story Dreamy.

*big happy sigh*

You've done good, my dear. This last chapter, although I already knew the conclusion, had me almost in tears. Waiting for the cemetary scene. Nice touch with the mark in the wood from Loch-nah's dagger thrown at Ardeth, by the way.

I'm almost sad the story is over but what a switch! You throw Frank Donovan in and I almost shouted with joy. Thank you for a wonderful read and the excuse not to finish my work on a Saturday morning [I'm sneaking on at my job.] LOL

A simple review: I love it! you didn't go where I expected with this and the ending was a surprise to me. It was great.

WOW! HOW AWESOME! Amber found Ardeth in Frank! What a FANTASTIC idea! Oh, I loved it! WOO HOO! Sequel? ;)

What a beautiful story, they found each other only to have there hearts open up to someone special in there time frame. I hope maybe there will be a sequel? Great story and really enjoyed it.

Wonderful story! Full of love and tenderness. I love the bittersweet quality of it. Very well done, I do hope there's a sequel. Kudos. -M

That was a very emotional ending Dreamy and I loved it. Oh I hope you do a sequel. This was absolutely beautiful hon.

A poignant ending...but a good one.