 Scraps off the Tapestry 2005-02-16 . chapter 13Have people started giving stuff to them yet? Well... A book on ReiKi healing (spirit energy healing, I think) for Ank.
An enoumous box of assorted chocolates for Scale...
And a glomp and yank off turban for my Shad Shad.
Actually, why don't you have someone call him that? Just give me credit, okay? Oh... How I love my Shad Shad. |
 XellosGirl 2004-12-18 . chapter 9 Haha this is such a great story! Indigo you are amazing. TIOC was really good and this is awesome too! Most people's prequals/sequals arent as good as their originals, but youre so talented! I love your stories, please write more!
P.S. Hehheh I think Shadi should go try to live with his Uncle Ahmed for awhile... ^^ It would be a funny chapter! |
 shadowphantomness 2004-12-13 . chapter 13Wai! I liked this fic, but especially the bits with Mahaado. ^-^ Keep up the good work! |
 Kenelfie 2004-12-12 . chapter 13Whoa...Information overload...I know how poor Shadi feels. Almost. I actually somewhat get it. (I think.) At least I know I get it more than I do geometry *shudders*. ~Elfie-chan~:) |
 Schala85 2004-12-12 . chapter 13I loved it! You all ready know how it affected me. ^__^ Please continue soon! |
 Seena 2004-12-12 . chapter 13Seena: Heehee, that was AWESOME! Do you know what murder it was waiting until this morning to read it? ^_^ I loved it! I stand in awe and worship of you once more! All hail the surpreme goddes of writing! *bows deeply* Ha, I loved it all, but I think my favourite part might have been Senui's dialogue with Akunadin. ^_^ Mweeheehee, it was so funny... I can picture it perfectly... ^_^ Ah, boku no kon'yakusha! *sighs happily and grins* And the insult, "If he weren’t immortal he would have died of pure stupidity long ago." ^_^ For some reason, I just thought that was funny, even if we all love Ankhkare. ^_^
Mana: *glares slightly at Seena, along with Chibife* Darn right! Watch what you say around me and your yami. ^_^ *laughs* Teehee, I remember doing that, going in and spying on Mahaado-sama... ^_^ I hated getting caught! After a while, I learned how to not be so obvious... ^_^ Spying's hard work, but I got pretty good! ^_^ ...Akunadin-san was planning on sealing MY soul into the Ring...? *shivers slightly*
Rai: ...And I spied too, here and there. ^_^ I just came up with excuses for when I got caught. It works better when you're more of an adult, people take you more seriously. *grins*
Chibife: ...Umm, a quick question, though. ...Where am I? ^_^ If I would be in any flashback, it would be Ankhkare's sealing. But other than that, I think it was perfect!
Miho: *nods* Yeah... Pegasus-san isn't like that. What a rude father! He reminds me kind of of my great-uncle Mostugi, on my mother's side. But it's nice to know that Pegasus-san was a really nice person like that as a kid... I hope Shadi-san doesn't hold his father's actions against him. After all, we can't help our parents. ...That boy... Badru... He was the old Eye-spirit? He didn't seem so bad... At least not this chapter. I feel badly for him... Akunadin used him. What a jerk! ...I wonder, if Akunadin and Badru were haunted and overcome by visions, too...
Seena: Yeah... Aww, I felt so badly for Shadi-kun at the beginning of this chapter! Hmm... it still isn't formatting your double slashes right? I noticed the (( and ))s. ^_^ Ha, and Shimon's "nocternal activities"... ^_^ I could just picture him saying that. ^_^
Anzuko: *sticks her tongue out at Akunadin* Baka, nothing's wrong with Atemu-kun! He's perfect, you're just jealous! And you were messing with your son's marriage, you have no room to talk! You think you can just insult the Pharaoh? NOW who's got treason?! I should- Hey! *gets dragged away by Zelina and Kisara, before she gets into trouble by provoking Akunadin*
Seena: *laughs* ^_^ Keep it up, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter! *runs off to write some of Ever Snow like a good girl* |
 Ananaka 2004-11-02 . chapter 12I love Ankh and Scale! Especially Senui! Ankh is very cute in my opinion too though, he seems easier to write. I love how you portray Shadi, he really is such an under rated character in
Yu-Gi-Oh. I did notice a few grammatical/ spelling errors, but nothing major. I loved Three in One Combo, and I love this! Please update soon. |
 Kalia 2004-10-26 . chapter 1 First off, I adore your characters, I'd like to Know how you came up with such colorful, believable, MALE characters. The plot is well thought out and original. There really isn't many good fanfics about Shadi, Kudos. Another thing though the spelling and grammer could be touched up a bit more, but over all, very very nice. I'v visited your site and I really like it. My favorite would have to be Senui but Ankh is a very good character as well. Nice job though. And I really would like to know how you came up with them. Please update as soon as you can. Thanks. |
 Mikazuki Kagaya 2004-10-21 . chapter 11will you send me chapter 12 (useful review? eh heh heh. . .)?
more later |
 XNemesis 2004-10-12 . chapter 12You'd think Pegasus would remember Shadi if he'd met him before. Anyways, do continue. I need goodfic. It helps withstand some of the really terrible Mary Sues out there.
XNemesis |
 shadowphantomness 2004-10-10 . chapter 12Very cool. ^-^ |
 Seena 2004-10-10 . chapter 11(for chapter 12)
Seena: E, this was so good! E, little chibi Shadi! ^_^ *resists an urge to glomp him* Aww, that poor thief. I ALMOST feel badly for him. ALMOST. ^_^
Mana: What was that about you not liking to kill people unless you had to, my fly-prince? ^_^
Seena: He deserved it! Go, Bakura! ^_^ E, and Pegasus is so cute! Heehee, I love how he's already running around and yelling "Jesus" and "Oh my God!" ^_^ I can picture it in his voice already and everything! Heehee, I should like to meet him sometime...
Mana: I wonder if he's going to call Shadi "Shadi-boy" some day... ^_^
Seena: Maybe... ^_^ Heh, and I told you that Pegasus-chan's parents remind me of mine, right? ...Except that my parents would NEVER let
me walk around Egypt on my own. They'd be afraid that I'd be kidnapped or killed or something.
Mana: Write more soon, Indigo! And I'll get THIS knucklehead back to work on Ever Snow... *pokes Seena* ...Though, it's also my fault.
I have... a lot of other stuff on my mind. Hae-chan's time is coming soon... So no offense to Ankhkare, but I haven't been thinking about
the past that much lately. ^_^ Which reminds me... am I still okay? Still healthy? And more importantly, is she? I haven't gone on any
pepperoni binges lately! ^_^ I've been a good girl. ^_^
Seena: Heehee... ^_^ In any case, write more, Indigo! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Seena 2004-10-10 . chapter 12Test! |
 Unrealistic 2004-10-08 . chapter 12 wow! It's been so long since I've seen an update from you! It's good to know you're still up and kicking!
I think I've said it once, but I'll still say that little Shadi is so cute! He's so nice, but we saw in this chapter he can be a fisty one. Completely not like he is in the manga, but that's a good thing.
I like Pegasus's into. That's a nice idea that they've met before. It would have given Pegasus more incentive to follow Shadi in the first place as we see in the episodes.
Hope this is long enough for you! I await more.
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 Kenelfie 2004-10-08 . chapter 12Yah! New chapter! I was very happy when I saw the author alert in my email. ^_^ I'm even happier now that I've read the chapter. ^__^ And happier yet because Pegasus is in it. ^_^ There's a way to make me even more happier. (^_^) Another chapter! (^_~) I hope you have time soon, but if not oh well. I guess I can live without it if I really really try. But don't make me try too long! ~Elfie-chan~:) |
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