 squirrelmaster 5/27/05 . chapter 4I really like your story. I can only think of one thing that could be done to make it better. Add Spike! I love Spike! Besides that, it's perfect!
TORI
Keep writing! |
 Lathya 1/15/05 . chapter 4GREAT FIC! I love the whole demon slayer-vampire slayer thing you have going here. It's very original. I wish SOME things were a little more detailed, but oh well. The romance is going a little fast, but it's detailed enough to be excellent. I really like this fic. Plz update soon.
Ja ne |
 SpontaneousCombustion 12/25/04 . chapter 4This is an awesome story. But the small fact that Hiei is a fire demon kind of confused me. |
 midnyteshadow 4/6/04 . chapter 1 good story..acutly Hiei has someone... ME !( just kidding)her name is Muruko,she comes in during the last saga of YYH... I have most of the DVDS an I've only found out about the end of the show by reading too many fanfics and having WAY too much time to surf the net while being obbsesed with YYH |
 Flybaby014563 3/20/04 . chapter 4Oh wow.Hiei's finally found someone!GOOD!He needs to find someone to love.He's too lonely.So I thought this was brilliant!Very nice.Keep up the good work.Hope you read mine.
-Nikki |
 Kiarah 3/8/04 . chapter 1 That was terrible. Really bad. Okay, so maybe I'm too used to the Japanese version, but that had no creativity. And you totally diminished Hiei's powers. |
 kori hime 12/2/03 . chapter 4kawaii! i love it! um, could u get spike into the story line somehow? spike AND hiei in the same fic! heaven! *faints* ; update soon! bye-e! |
 Kailyssia 11/16/03 . chapter 4THIS FIC IS AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS FIC, IT IS WONDERFULLY WRITTEN! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Amanda 10/18/03 . chapter 4 HEY! that's a great fic! Please update VERY soon i can't wait to find out more!
and i hate knoing that there's all these different things that COULD happen!
Amanda!
p.s. can you help me to find out how to post a fanfic? if you van email me please
thanx bunches |
 Meghan 10/6/03 . chapter 1 Love this story, very active. Plz update more, I must read more of this.
Thanks |
 HIEIhotsause 8/8/03 . chapter 4 aw, i love the idea of Hiei having a mate. and i love Buffy the Vampire Slayer. the only problem with Buffy is she doesn't know who to love. god, so far she has slept with every one except for the girls and Giles. anyway plz get to work on the story, i love this. if you do get to work on it agian which is a 7% chance make Buffy come into the story! YAY! I'M SO HAPPY TODAY! |
 drunken angel 7/22/03 . chapter 4 *glares angrily* Alexz come on where have you been? Two months! Two months and no update what the hell is up with that? You left us on such an evil cliffhanger you never said if that was how it ended or what. Is it over? Is there more? Can I get a clue? If this is the end (I'm hoping it isn't) can we get an epilogue, anything? Its not fair for you to just leave us like this. update or at least inform us if this is the end, cause personally I'd like to know. Thanks. |
 KAILYSSIA 7/16/03 . chapter 4 PLEASE UDATE SOON! i really like your story so far. the way you have it going it will get interesting real soon, that is if you update. your story is so good please finish it. it's such a waste when great authors don't finish really good stories. FANTASTIC FIC, UPDATE SOON! |
 DRAGON FIRE 6/6/03 . chapter 4 *sniffel* That was...*sniffel* beautiful*bursts into uncontrolable tears* Please update soon you can't keep me waiting for something so great,so long. *sniffel* Bye *bursts into tears again* |
 DC 6/3/03 . chapter 4 Awe! Another great chapter Alexz, but no less than I'd expect from you. It's great to have another chapter and I can't wait till the next one. I'll try to be patient until then so see ya! Ja! |