Just curious where you found the name Nkemontoh...

I liked how your story came from a difference angle than most TS stories. Setting it after Blair became a detective. I prefer to read the longer stories and I enjoyed reading this one.

Hi Inkling,

I know it was a LONG time ago when you wrote this, but I still wanted to say how much I loved it. I've never even seen this show, but your writing is so slick and intelligent and so well done, it didn't matter. Great story.

really got into the story

Good job- I liked how you went into Jim's senses overwhelming him.

*zap!* This one goes on my favorites list! I'm always excited to read stories where Blair's abilities as a detective can shine through. Great characterization, and wonderful dialogue! This could have been an episode. I look forward to any new Sentinel stories coming from you :)

Thanks for writing!

You wrote a really good story here. Loved the reference to the show Emergency.

Good job! I liked it. :)

This was such a good story. I really liked that Blair was actually respceted as a cop in this story. I also like the relationship between Simon and Blair, I think it's sweet. Kind of a father son thing. Keep the good work up.