 Lady McSnape 7/18/09 . chapter 3Goodness gracious! Why haven't I stumbled on this story before?
This is so great and I wish you write more of this! I like the idea of Minerva and Severus - you know - like together. Basically, because I'm a great fan of their pairing. Is there any chance you'll continue this story or it just simply ends there?
I really look forward to the next chapters. Please write.
Thanks! |
 anonymlous 1/18/08 . chapter 1 ewewewewewewewewew EW! they kissed, ew ew ew |
 anne P 9/30/05 . chapter 3 Very interesting story I cant wait to read more please update soon. |
 zafaran 8/21/05 . chapter 3Okay, this was interesting. Bit strange around the edges, but interesting. I'll look forward to seeing other work by your. Zafaran
zafaran at fastmail. fm |
 Athena Keating-Thomas 2/15/05 . chapter 3Yeow. A powerfully written story, and a rather different take on McGonnagal... |
 Lady Urquentha 1/11/05 . chapter 3Interesting 'interrogation' session end. |
 Lady Urquentha 1/11/05 . chapter 2Talk about unexpected! How many husbands would send their wives to another man's bed, a YOUNGER man at that! |
 Midge Magpie 12/10/04 . chapter 1Kinky! Odd. Beautiful, and strange. Intimate: a story played out in the shadow and light of rooms rather than the corridors of buildings; a drama of single meeting minds rather than over-busy crowd scenes. So very unlike Rowling-writing, which is the highest of compliments, coming from me. |
 Leni Jess 2/25/04 . chapter 3Well, well. A most interesting and logical presentation of Snape’s abandonment of Voldemort. I like your Minerva (sorry, I’m not too fond of Albus, though yours is good; I suppose I have trouble with his ethics, though I can’t imagine what would have been better to do).
I also like this backstory you are developing for the Professor McGonagall we see now, her student days, her love for Tom, her marriage to Albus (a neat thought). I very much like the way you examine canon Minerva so carefully and include all those little details in the backstory. It helps to give a richness to the individual stories you write.
I've just realised this is still a WIP – from your LJ entries, not from the story as posted on FFN. What does that say about my grasp of story structure, I wonder? |
 Rendomski 1/14/04 . chapter 1Gee, this story (like the rest of the EW) is absolutely gorgeous! Hope to find some more soon...
Renata D. |
 desevera 12/14/03 . chapter 3 Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!
I love the way your characterisation makes each character so human - although usually I think of Snape as more...cold blooded...than your portrayal, it works really well in this fic. I also enjoyed the idea of Minerva somehow turning full circle from Tom, to Albus, to Snape...
Sx |
 CEA 11/16/03 . chapter 1Hey. I just saw something that really pissed me off - some one ripped this fanfic off.
An author by the name of 'Sevie's Gurl' took this story and postred it (titled The Green Thingy) with a horrible summary... it has the exact wording yours does and everything, it's the exact same story, and that's not right and completely against the rules.
I thought you ought to know. This is an excellent, amazing fanfic and you deserve all the credit.
Love,
*CEA |
 anonymoose 10/27/03 . chapter 3 (opens mouth, looks about to say something, then closes mouth)
(repeats)
you're a very gifted writer.
the fandom needs more characters to work with. |
 Crookykanks 10/24/03 . chapter 3Oh my gosh! Wow! That is so wonderful! I really like MM/SS more than MM/AD because of ages, but this just so fabulously done! Please continue it! It's just so wonderful, a sequel? Or just more chapters. I'm nearly crying from the sheer emotion in it! Please post more! It's beautiful!
- (meow!) |
 Jestana 10/2/03 . chapter 3 *blinkblink* Hmm, well, that was interesting. Very unique twist, I admit. I can't help feeling sorry for Dumbledore. It must have hurt so much to have to do that to Snape. *sniffle* I'd like for you to update soon, but I understand if you can't. Bravo on an excellent chapter. |