I must say that this is a very good beginning to RE:3. You must be a big fan.

interesting lil story i put it in my jill c2

This is a very beautifully writen story^_^ You've got Jills character down very good. I hope you write more storys like this soon!
~Jellysunshine~

Wow, excellent little story!
I loved Resident Evil 3, unfortunately my PS2 won't play that anymore. Ill have to get it for the Gmaecube then lol. Anyway, that totally blew me away. The way everything was set out, and it stays true to the game. It really does show what Jill would have been thinking. Well done!

I Love tha Resident Evil Series. This is tha first fanfic I've read on Resident Evil at all. U described N detail so well I could actually C what happenin, like I wuz there. P.S. that wuz really great. ^_^

Wow... This is great...

wow this story is very good. I liked it when you got into Jill shoes so that you know what she is filling at that time. how on earth do you come up with great stuff like this, good luck with your storys you kick **

Hm Hmm Hm indeed.

Well prepare yourself for one of the longest reviews you'll probabely ever get (because unlike almost everyone else on this site, I point out where the author can improve and what I think is good about the story...whoopdi-**-doo for me.)

As always, I'll start off with the good things about this story.

For the most part, spelling was very well done, and I found only a couple grammar problems. The story/diary entry (or that's what I think it's supposed to be) in general was very nicely written. A big step up from what I've seen over most of FFN. I especially liked the ending. Very well done.

And now for the bad.

Though for the most part spelling was good, there's a couple little things. Like at one point she said, "It's too late for me," but you accidentally said, "It's to late for me," with one 'o' instead of two. That happened like...right after that too, but compared to the bigger picture, it's not that big of a deal, but it's still something to look out for when writing.

The grammar errors I found were things like pooints where a period should be instead of a space or a comma or what have you.

Aside from that...uh...I think that's about all. I can't really think of anything else except that as an extra thing you could do, is explain a bit what past experiences she's talking about.

I know that this is based off of the games but you have to take into consideration that not everyone has played the games. So, in this case it's not a big problem but keep it in mind for later fanfics you do.

Anyway, aside from all that, I'd say this was a good read and very nicely done. Keep up the good work, and keep an eye out for the little things I mentioned. I am, by far, not the best author out there but it's still always good to look into other's works and see if maybe one could help others (and one's self) to improve on their abilities.

Keep up the good work.

Peace.



"Do you know how far this has gone...
Just how damaged have I become?
When I think I can overcome...
It runs even deeper...
Everything that matters is gone...
All that gives us hope has withdrawn...
Could you try and help me hang on?
It runs even deeper... "

- Even Deeper by Nine Inch Nails

Once again, if I knew anything about RE, this woukd mean more. But I really wanted to know what happened after this.. THE AGONY! I want a sequel even more than CD3 now somehow.. Cool. Oh well.

My God, that was so good...so, so good...nearly brought a tear to my eye...^_^...anyway, excellent writing, I love your style. The whole thing was very heartfelt and seemed a perfect rendition of Jill's thoughts. I love it!

Interesting, hpe he makes it, he's got guts. GTo out there, and do what you can! No fear! I think this was very interesting to read. One thing, about your update-bio-thingy. It doesn't take big fancy words to be more discriptive, although it would be cool. See ya'!

~*~Shadow4ever~*~

very descriptive and well-worded,if this is only going to be one chapter, I hope you continue to write more fics in the future!

You describe what Jill was going through perfectly.. that's good

Ah well, Good fic