That's really good. I hope you carry on with it!

That was really good. I like that Demeter's not a fragile little thing that needs protecting like she is other fics.

OOh, tis good! I especially liked Demi's character - not so very helpless. Good for you.

Aw! That was reely interesting. I feel sorry for Demeter tho. I think you captured everyone's character reely well, espcially Munk and Demeter. I liked how you portraied Bombie as well! Will there be a sequel??