Ohh, That’s so sad! I can’t beleive waht happeced!! You have to update! You just can’t
leave the story like this!well, I really hope you update soon.

Lulu Bell :-)

Hey - well that was a long chapter. very good, but morbid. hey will you guys do me a favour and r and r my story? the Jack and Delilah story? I think you guys will eventually like it! Thanks SO much - totally feel free to e-mail me n e time too! see yah!

Wow. So long...so sad! It was great but sad!! Don't let Soda be dead tho! He can't kill himself! That's just not right!! Continue soon!

This was really good and sad! I loved it. Update soon!

*~*Lynn*~*

WTF?!?!?!?! IS SODA F-ing OUT OF HIS MIND?!?!?! NO! HE CANT DO THAT! but he did...NO! YOU BETTER CONTINUE!! IM GONNA GO CRAZY!

This took you 4 months? Seriously? It;s just dialouge and NO details whatsoever...eh, I have to say I'm a lil dissapointed in this...it wasn't even that sad, because you didn't do a good job with getting the right emotions...sry, but that's my opinion, and plz, don't get all offended and try and write a retraction in your next chapter ** about this, 'cause it's just a waste of time...by the way, if people give you critizem, (And I don't mean "this sucks" but actual advice), there's probably a good reason.