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Catmint 2004-03-10 . chapter 2
This is hilarious!
*hurries off to read 'The Lesson'*
Coolio02 2003-11-24 . chapter 2
Good ending! I'm so glad you made a sequel! I'm going off to read it now!^_^
Coolio02 2003-11-24 . chapter 1
Oh dear, the twins are plotting and planning. *Gulp!* Poor Rivendell

"In Derby Town, in Derby Town

The streets are made of glass

And every time a pretty lass goes by

A man look up her-"

LOL, that was funny! ^_^Now I'm off to read the next chapter!
Ivy 2003-10-25 . chapter 2
Heehee, Poor Estel!
And poor Elrohir too, eating that yellow snow! Although the yellow potion sounds remotely like something the Harry Potter twins made in the 5th book...

Very funny and I can't wait to see what Mithrandir has planned! Evil Wizard!
Menegliniel 2003-05-12 . chapter 2
jijijiji poor Estel jijiji love it gotta have more! nice job keep it goin' ;)
wild horse 2003-04-17 . chapter 2
hahaha. eat yellow snow! go. hahaah, i liked it alot! more!
Nerwen Calaelen 2003-04-12 . chapter 2
It is really funny! The twins were being so clever.

For your challenge, does the antagonist have to be named in the books?

I look forward to reading more of your stories.
wild horse 2003-04-11 . chapter 1
drunk elves. that's something i've always thought about. hurry up and complete it! i like it lots. :)
YoungPadfoot 2003-04-10 . chapter 1
LMAO!! *Snickers* Wicked!! ^_^ That was absolutely wicked... *Evil smile* More to come?
Leguini 2003-04-06 . chapter 1
Hey! I loved it! (But I guess you already knew that):-) So when is your next stroy coming out? Soon I hope, because if it is anything like these I will be rolling on the floor with laughter. (Well not really rolling on the floor but you know what I mean) Oh and by the way the basketball game was great I hope you watched at least some of it. Oh and you better watch the one on Monday. (Only a freek like you wouldn't) Well I g2g work on Global. See you later and happy writing.
~Pasta Boy
Silent Sadist 2003-04-06 . chapter 1
HEHEHEHEHEHEHHEEHHEHEHEH!
UPDATE PLEASE? I LUV IT SO FAR
Nerwen Calaelen 2003-04-05 . chapter 1
Funny story. I look forward to reading more.
hobbitsrfun 2003-04-05 . chapter 1
Oh! I can't wait to see what'll happen. The twins are evil!
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