PLEASE CONTINURE! This sounds like it could be fun to read!

XD just me again. reading through some of your most fabulous stuff. my goodness, you inspire me to start writing again.

good story, btw

Oh, PLEASE continue! This is a beautiful beginning!

~~Nao

Oh yes please continue

wow interesting story...kinda makes me wonder how come her wound healed so quickly etc...or didn't she remember anything about that? Or was it healed by magic?...well written story. BTW I know this is not very related, but love horses (I am not an expert on horse riding, I only done it once) and I love that song 'Haunted' by Evanescence...I can see how it would fit with the story. Thanx for sharing.

Best Wishes,

PHF

I saw you first on the imdb, and I was curious to see what you had written when I saw you were also a member of fanfiction. I know it's been a few years since you wrote this, but I really think you should come back to this and write more. It's been quite some time since I've seen this movie, but I'm slowly remembering it all, and I think this could have real potential if you'd put more work into it. I implore you, please write more to this, I'm curious to know if you'll have Sarah's attitude change within five months staying with Jareth, that much time with him would surely have some effect on her. You could even bring everyone else in to this, especially Didymus who I adored.

'Kay, first I want to say that I adore your story, it is written exquistly, I was also hoping you would be updating soon, I write fanfiction to so I am aware of the pressures reviewers present you wit, but you can't write such a wonderful story and then abandon us when it starts to get really good. So please continue wiith this story.

Dammit - CONTINUE! Please. So good. *Cries* Pretty please.

Interesting story. I'd like to see where you take it.

The transition between Sarah being on the mountain-side bleeding and being with Jareth seemed really rough and confusing at first, but it made more sense when Sarah didn’t understand what was happening either.

i beg of you to continue this story, it has a wonderful plot so far, and you could explain more about their first "dream" encounters. i think it would be a wonderful idea, so please continue with this story.

Please write more.

write more

I really liked the beginning and would like to read the full story, but I can't get a hold of it, could you e-mail it to me. nyxcaligal@hotmail.com

If not, that's ok, I'm reading your other stories at the moment, so I'll live.

You should go on, its good but it could really be expanded on.

This is great! Do continue it in any case! Although I must say that you have a hand for very fast-moving chapters...