lisent i like your story but i think u should put more effort on updating more because people want to know what's going to happen and here is a compliment your story is one of the best and only one in fanfiction about the dark angel trilogy wich is an awsome book and quite frankly u don't look like u do it justice by just leaving it there in chapter 2 so please update alright i hope that u take my advice because i think u are a great writer even if u are lazy sometimes which we all are by the way, but u got potential and talent so don't let go to waste ok.

cheers...:)

this is great! please Please PLEASE update it soon! btw, is this supposed to be a rewrite of the last book (maybe with a better ending? :) )

c'mon Twylise update! i really love this fanfic and i'm basically centered around it! please update

Hooray! Darkangel fanfics rule! By any chance, are you an anime/manga fan? I enjoyed the way you painted Erin as somewhat mischievious and cheery. Very good, so far.

ahh good please continue :)

I just came across you fic, and I love it :)
Please continue to update!
Of the trilogy I'm only on the second book, so I should prolly speed up my reading so I can fnd out what happens!
*hisses at Irrylath* meanie...

I'm so happy to see a Darkangel fic. it's a great plot beginning please update soon.

New Chappie! YEah! Oh, but couldn't of it been longer? ah well, no matter, please just get the next one out soon!

Hm. Interesting. I HATED the ending of the trilogy, make it better pleae!;) Your writing style is fairly good, straightforward and easy to read! Good! Update soon please, I'm eager to read some more.

So it's turning kinda into an AU fic...that's cool. Five bucks says that Irrylath ends up going on the expidition too! And possibly Sabr...I mean, I'm assuming that you're an Aeriel/Irrylath shipper, even though he acts like a jerk a lot.

YAY! You've finally updated! What's this? How long has it been? more than half a year!
But I'm glad that u updated, so no more complaints.
Wonderful chapter - ooh, poor Aeriel. Sometimes I could really hate Irrylath for being so mean to Aeriel. Aozora sounds really intriguing.
Hope u update soon! And please let it not be in like June of 2004 - lol. ; )

Poor Aeriel. I always felt bad for her during the series. She went through so much and asked for so little for her own happiness, yet she seemed to be denied even that. *sigh* You capture the characters emotions well with your descriptions. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for your next update :)

oh, can you find out what mystique means in japanese? Anyways back to the story, wasn´t irrylath in love with his wife? and why are you taking so long to update the darkangel fics.

I'm a little confused about when this story is taking place. It must be before the third book right? 'cause they haven't defeated the Witch yet. In any case I really like it. i noticed you haven't updated anytime soon. I hope I'm not gonna have to wait a long time for the next chapter...

OOh! A Darkangel fic! *leaps* Okay, I noticed one thing: you said "Irrylath's 7 half brothers", and it's 7 all together, he has 6 half brothers. But otherwise it's really good! I love Irrylath and Erin bickering! But what did Erin want to tell her?