I think you did a really good job portraying izumi's for me i have only seen the oav's so im not so knowledgeable with the manga;.; but i still loved your fic.

Wow. This is pretty good.

A great story! I just read the manga which belongs to the scene today. It fits great. Now I can understand Izumi better. I think this could really be his thoughts. I like the story very much. It's melancolic and sad and it catches the emotions which belong to the scene. Just great. _

This is the POV of the soccer player, ne? Gomen, not very familiar with Zetsuai but I love the fic. Wish I can write that way!

Ja!