Awesome Mutant X story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~

Hey there! Had read this one awhile back, don't think I reviewed tho, sorry. Then saw it over on the Pure Boards and started reading again. I noticed how much you let Jesse use his powers when he faught, that doesn't happen enough. Too many writers (esp. on the series) tend to ignore his powers, which I think are just the coolest. So wanted to thankyou for that it. It is a good Jesse/Shal story and I (in my humble opinion) think you should do more. Do a romance between them, I think they have great chemistry and there is no reason they can't have a blistering romance!
hehehe :) K

Hey sis! I love your story! (I hope you can guess who this is. Did you have any trouble figuring it out with RK9?? ;)) Once again, I loved your story!

Hi, frickangel. Remember me? I love this story. You should definitely do another. :)

Thanks for feeding the Jesse need!

What a sweet ending. I absolutely loved this. You have a great knack for characterization and I loved the originality. Please write another.

great finish! i dont really know what else 2 say, but it was really good! keep 'em comming! :D

Hey this is cool! I esp enjoy reading stories about the days before Mutant X came about and all. That's because I just started watching the show and haven't the slightest idea about the GSA and whatsoever...Lol...I do know who's Mason tho...Haha...Well I've just read your first chapter and will be reading more! ;)

I totally LOVE the conversation between SHalimar and Jesse...somehow in fan fiction they can really do something they never have time for on TV..really, really talk..please go on...that cant be the end, can it?

Well done.

You're story has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! You're a very talented writer and you should write another, as soon as you can!

oh wow, that was an awesome chapter. I really like this story, its so different from the others, Great job, i can't wait for more

*wipes eyes* it was soo touching!! another great great chapter from ya!! i swear this story just keeps on getting better and better!! loved the interaction between jesse and shalimar u wrote it beautifully! yer doing such a wonderful job with this story its really developing into my all time favorite!! keep up the great work!! cant wait for the next chapter *looks at watch*!!lol!

What do I think? 8o plus reviews for 8 chapters! That must say a lot! How cute! I luv these cutsie chapters after a fight! Family stories are the best!

definitely alright! It was col. go jesse go! i loved how you wroiote his character, it was great. one of the better jesse writers. not enough about. doo write more soon!