Yeah, yeah, so it's a meaningless and plotless reason for a Gate n' Dynamo, but who cares. Gate and Dynamo isn't a pairing you see everyday, but i fancy the idea of it. I like this so far, it's interesting n' cute. Pretty good.

You... YOU CUT OUT THE LEMON! *sniff*

Oh well. You're probably right about the FF.net banning you. Still, I like this story.

This actually isn't too bad. ^^ However, I do have to point out that there were a lot of spelling mistakes that you might wanna correct in the next chapter. Overall, though...pairing is good. ^_^ But I'm weird that way.

Lemon pie... I really like this, it's funny...