T_T Hot. Sexy. Underlyingly sad. Beautiful. Well done

awe! that was really good! I loved it! great pairing as well...do you think it's normal that i...a girl, finds stories like these hot? *shurgs* oh well...cuz i do. anyway...brilliant work!

This was really good. The pain and angst Harry was feeling, they could be so true! If I were in his position, I definitely would feel the same. And so I say, simply, this was a beautiful little fic.

nice... everyone should go to hell, save Slytherin, and have them take Harry up as their heir...
~jI

Okay, away with my horrible profanity. (I feel terrible, but your writing just kind of...evoked that response from me.)

This sounds dark, just from Harry's first little POV there. But you see? Draco taking pity on Harry and wondering why...that seems to be the general formula for how this all starts. But then Draco goes and starts being an arse again! (okay, I can swear once in a while about Draco when they're not having sex ;) )

And did Harry just call Malfoy "pouffy"? Somewhat hypocritical...or wait, not there yet, LOL.

But...Harry...he's being so...suicidal? Not cool. At all. So Harry wrote a six-foot essay on his future instead of three? Uhh...confused. What does it say? Guess I'll hafta keep reading ;)

And it's NOT suicidal? okay...Time to do some nice, long reading here.

Wow. Erm...WOW. ...
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...Wow...?

That was...that's going straight onto my bulletin board, hon. I'm printing that out as we speak...er, as I'm writing this.

Haha...can't say I exactly understand this ending, but...it's excellent! EXCELLENT...erm...well, THAT, you know what I mean. This fic was interesting. Not as interesting as the Onyx fic, but very interesting nonetheless. You make me want a boyfriend like Draco ;)

OMG you can't end it here! This was soo good. I know I am not a fan of reading d/h romantic stories, but god I just seem to love yours, GREAT JOB, plez continue!!

And again with the WOW! I just have to say that I'm really glad I came across your name. I found one of your stories on someone's favorite list (I forget who) and I'm really loving them! I plan to read more, but just have to say you're a great writer and I love this stuff!

Wow! I have read so many books, fanfics and other kinds of text, but I have never, in all my life read something so inspiring, so well-written and so...moving. You are the best writer in the world! The way you write is different to other authors, you MUST keep writing this story!

OMG this story was great. I hope you continue it.
It's just great.

Threw in a little bit of Toby Keith there, huh? I love that song.. Wrote a songfic using it, too. Anyway, that was absolutely beautiful. Harry is so misunderstood. He has to do what everyone else wants him to do. It's good that he finally decided to inform everyone that he, too, was a person who deserved to live. At least Draco had seen that in him. And that scene at the beginning in Potions? How scandalous! But it really needed to be said. Snape deserved it. That was really great. I loved it!

aw... Draco's just a big softie in the end, en't he? Now... don't you think someone would have noticed two boys shagging by the lake in broad daylight, not even bothering to be quiet? What *will* the rest of the school think? Not that Harry gives a flying rat's ** about that anyway, but what about Lucius? Won't Draco be in trouble when his father finds out about this? You must write more. You must!

Lovely story... but the essay doesn't seem to be six feet long, does it?

Yay, Harry/Draco! Good fic, I hope you decide to continue this though I don't know exactly where you could go from here. Anyway, I liked it a lot, great job!