very good, but very sad too. I loved the use of lyrics (?) Im not sure that Spike would be so rash, but then it makes for a sad and unexpected ending...after-all too much fluff rots one's brain ;)

I LOVE this story!!!

Great

And that is why you should never, ever hurt Spike like that. Great story. :)

Woah. Deep thoughts... Doesn't sound like something that Spike would have done/thought, but I could still see it happening. Very good poem, BTW. Wish I knew what book you got it from. =^.^=

morbid ,that was tragic ,i was genuinely saddened by the ending and i think you should write more pieces like this as it has had a profound effect on me ,maybe i should start writing tragic stuff as it always seems to be better than the usual unoriginal endings that most romance fics contain .angst rules

I like it... but I think that Spike has more self-preservation than that. I just can't see him committing suicide over/with Drusilla. (9)