Very good and touching story.Great beggining and great ending but it got awkward at Kari talking about Daisuke. You are a very good writer.

Wow. liked it, liked it lots. hm. . . . although, i wish you have included some Taichi in here, 'cause everyone loves TAICHI!!!!! ^_^
but anyway, ya did real good, especially when Hikari was explaining her feeling. all right, i completely despise Daikari's, but it's still sad how Dai and Kari aren't as good friends anymore (I'm a sympathist I like people who aren't supposed to be couples to be at least good friends ^_^; )
well, hope ya write more, and happy writing to you too.

another great piece of work!
=)

very sweet, i luv takari fics

heheheee Takari 4eva!!!!!!

As the tittle: Perfect. Keep writting.

this story sucks badly

I can't believe Kari ditched him! Though I figured something like that would happen when there were so many comments about how perfect the night would be...*G* that always jinxs things. But the end was really sweet and I loved it, especially how Hikari explained her feelings and her fears about what happened between her and Daisuke repeating with her and Takeru. I loved it! Good job :)

That was so cute!

GGGGGRRRRREEEEEEEAAAAAATTTTTTT story!!! That was cute, faboulous, and funny how the jocks acted.

Now this is a touching story. In the middle there i thought i was going to cry when Matt tell Kari have broke his heart over Andrew. "sniff, sniff" Anyways great story. I just love it.

Cute!!!!! Write more.

*screams like some sort of obsessive Takari fan* Ohhhhhhh GOD! Did I ever miss you!! THAT was extraordinary. THAT is called breaking through writer's block with a vengence. I've lost track of how many Prom/Dance fics I've read, but I think you just trumped 'em all. T.K.'s thoughts when playing ball were just absolutely perfecto! Stunning, superb work here. Rave review!! -- kale

OMG!!! *screams hysterically* Jade I am SO glad you're over writer's block...I loved this fic!! It was amazing!! Just an awesome Takari...and the ending was so incredibly sweet...awwww...but poor Daisuke! OMG I just loved the characterization, the dialogue, just everything...please never never stop writing, 'k?!!
~~Jehana

not bad...