 rae 2003-07-22 . chapter 1 Would you please send a new chapter,you started good so far but then you stopped. Please finish it |
 Darkened Soul1 2003-05-22 . chapter 1I hope Domon finds Rain...HE'D BETTER! *shakes fist threateningly* Just kidding, you're an awesome writer. PLEASE continue VERY soon. |
 Artemis1082 2003-04-18 . chapter 1hey!! i love this chapter! i hope that domon has enough common sense left in his brain after simply letting rain slip through his fingers to go out there and chase after her...
and why is he going to visit allenby!? sorry, but i hate her... ::vent:: gr...
is the band that rain left domon a wedding ring or simply a gift that he gave her or an engagement ring? and i LOVE chibodee's character!! someone needs to put domon in his place and make him realize that he's a fool for letting the woman who loves him like crazy leave...
i hope that you bring rain in for the next chapter and reveal what's going to happen, anyway, great chapter and i hope for more from you soon!! later
~Raye |
 khay 2003-04-07 . chapter 1wow...so,when's your next update? =) |
 Black Joker Lady 2003-04-07 . chapter 1 Boy oh boy, this was a different fic. Rain left Domon and he now wants her back. (Deja vu) Poor Domon... I HATE Allenby. But I enjoyed this story. I'm sorry but I've never heard of it (What ever you mentioned) Sorry. I hope you write another story soon. |