It's so funny, I laughed tears!
And it is SO Vetinari, to take revenge in such a way.

Great Job, that fic!

*wipes eyes*

Oh gods... balls... I think I'll die laughing. Poor Carrot.

Ha! Absolutely hilarious!

Alas, I am no poet, but I just had to give it a try:

Though Lord Vetinari invites none to his halls,
He can often be spotted at other Lord's balls.
His clerk's disappointed, for he's always enjoyed
To fiddle with balls; that's why he's employed.

Tehe. Love it! It had me laughing out loud a lot ... And you even kept in character as far as I could tell ... Great work! :)
Lon

That's about seven flavors of awesome I see there. I literally laughed out loud at Carrot's innocence. That there's a Vimes verse is just the best. Really, though, I should be ashamed of myself, laughing at Vetinari's lack of balls. Lol.

Funny thing...as I was reading this fic, a certain ACDC song was also playing on the radio.

Now I can't breathe for laughing.

Because we all know if Lady Sybil *did* hear that verse, she'd stitch a sampler of it and hang it on the wall.

Grr! I hate you! You made me laugh so much I choked! Well, okay, can't blame someone for being hilarious... And the song is wonderful. Not many people can write poetry. People who can write poetry while sick... well, that takes some real balls! *dissolves into uncontrollable laughter*

I am so, so envious of your filk- and fic-writing skills now. That was great! And now I want to sing it... woe...

Nice! Very in character and totally believable. and fun. ~_^

:claps: Very good! Well written and v. funny. Great work.

Brilliant. Really. I love your work! ^_^

That was absolutely hilarious! I think you had way too much fun with this. ^_^ You're an excellent filker; keep up the good work!

Do you know what? This is the very first Prattchett fanfic I've ever read. And it was very, very good. Will be reading more!

It had me laughing giddily. Again. This is getting to be a habit with me reading your fics.