 Valkyrie4 2003-05-01 . chapter 17Aw...not fair, even though Jamie was a ** in the beginning, she turned out alright in the end. Ah well, at least we had a happy ending. |
 Valkyrie4 2003-05-01 . chapter 16YES! That bastard finally got what he deserved ^_^ At last, Jamie retalliated against him, talk about back-stabbing. Gonna read the next chapter now! |
 ChocolateEclar 2003-04-29 . chapter 17That was a cute ending. ^_^ Ya! Mr. Tightly is dead! *Mr. Tightly voodoo doll bursts into flames* ^_-
Bye! ^_^ |
 Tigra, Kat, and Risika 2003-04-27 . chapter 17 *Appear in the HFIL*
Risika: There he is!
Mr. Tightly: Who the hell are you!?
Kat: We're friends of Cheena!
Risika: Well, she actually is my sister. We have the same last name and parents. SO SHE IS MY SISTER!!
Tigra: I'M JUST HERE TO KILL YOUR **!!
Mr. Tightly: I'm already dead your idoits.
Kat: Correction, if we kill you again. You'll no longer wxist in the afterlife. GET HIM!
Tigra: *Lunges at him and tackles him to the ground and starts to bang his head agianst the ground* BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Risika: NOW, WHILE TIGRA HAS HIM DISTRACTED!! *Risika and Kat tie all the explosives to Mr. Tightly and pour gunpowder, kerosen, and gasoline on him*
Kat: OK TIGRA!! COME HERE AND SET HIM ON FIRE!!
Tigra: *gets up and grabs a blowtorch, so does Kat and Risika*
Risika: Time to die **!
Kat: FIRE!
*they set tightly on fire with the blowtorches, meanwhile everyone else in HFIL is watching and running away*
Tigra: BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I'M SO HAPPY!
*Mr. Tightly dies, gone forever..YES!*
Risika: Well, that takes care of that. Were going home!
Kat: Yep, we have completed our mission.
Tigra: I got to kill the bastard! YES!
Risika: Yep, we've had fun. Lets go home.
*Kat and Tigra grab hold and they dissappear*
~Great story! I loved it!~ |
 Swimming Angel 2003-04-26 . chapter 17Thank goodness your making another saga!
If you weren't, then I would scream! I mean, what would an ending like that be (no offense). I mean, not seeing ur friend anymore, is tough.
I'm glad that your doing another sequel to this. I can't believe how much I've missed since I've been off the computer!
Hurry up with the next story! And just dying to read!
~*~Swimming Angel~*~ |
 Trunxgurl 2003-04-26 . chapter 17Woah man gotta read sooner. Been busy and very lazy. =D That was a very good second part. Hope to read the 3rd part soon. TTYL |
 Crecy 2003-04-26 . chapter 17 Me:YAY! That was great ending!! And you can barrow da banner anytime!
Cado: Um... I wonder if there's any cake left...
Asper: You ate it all, remember?
Cado: But I'm still hungry... *pouts*
Maia: *slaps Cado upside the head* You ALWAYS hungry!
Chirusa: Your so mean to him.
Maia: so?
Cado: If you give me a kiss I'll forgive you. *hopeful look*
Maia: NO! *storms off*
Me: *sigh* They ALWAYS have to come ruin my review.
Asper: *srugs* OH well.
Me: Remember, I'm out of that cage, It won't do you good to get me angry. *growls*
Asper: *eyes widen* Uh oh! *runs off*
Me: GOOD! Now... where's that slice of cake I saved? ^_^ Yummy! |
 chico 2003-04-26 . chapter 17THAT WAS COL I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT SAGA |
 Kativa-chan 2003-04-25 . chapter 17Aw, it's over, and Jamie left. How sad :( But I know in the next part she'll come back ^_^ |
 Trunksprincess4life 2003-04-25 . chapter 17Great Chapter and Great Story! I can't wait to see the next part to this. I wonder what happens to everyone in that one? Hope to find out soon. |
 N-sama 2003-04-25 . chapter 17^_^ Cant wait for the 3rd part of the Jamie Saga! ^^ Great chapter! |
 Sailor Bree 2003-04-25 . chapter 17I wonder what's going to happen to Jamie now. You know, since Mr. Tightly isn't there anymore.
Chibi Gohan: Hmm...I wonder too.
You know, I went to search Mr. T. apartment and lookie at what I found! *Holds up the needle with the drug*
Chibi Gohan: YOU SAID THAT YOU WEREN'T GOING TO USE THAT!!
When did I say that? *Looks innocent*
Chibi Gohan: But-but-you said-wait a minute...don't come any closer! GET AWAY FROM ME WITH THAT! *runs*
WAIT GOHAN COME BACK! It's seems I'm always chasing after this boy! |
 Sailor Bree 2003-04-25 . chapter 16I'm awake! And I read the chapter! Maybe I should give Gohan some of that stuff that was in Mr. Tightly needle thingy...
Chibi Gohan: WHAT!?
^^ Oh, I'm just kidding Gohan! *crosses finger behind her back*
Chibi Gohan: You'd better be!
That tightly finally got what he deserved! And for some reason that scene where he throws the knife at Goku reminded me of what Frieza did!
Chibi Gohan: You too, huh?
Yeah, maybe Mr. Tightly was Frieza in diguise!
Chibi Gohan: Then wouldn't he be going after all the GUYS!?
Good point... |
 chico 2003-04-25 . chapter 16That was wicked HE DIED! YAY GO GOKU GO GOKU |
 Trunksprincess4life 2003-04-25 . chapter 16HE IS DEAD!! YES!! ABOUT TIME! Ok, now that I got that out of my system, I would like to say...UPDATE SOON! |