and so concludes season two. You humouros Tate is quite comical, really great and I love the whole wit thing at the end just one question - was it the chosen that Tommy sent into her or was it something else because green eyes and longer nails seems to signal Mack so just wondering - and if so why only three balls of light - Tate's, Tommy's and Merton's what happened to Mack or was he the third light?

Hehe. Never teach meditation or divination to someone who is in a place prone to denomic attacks. If I was not reading this after you had finished the story, I would be cursing under my breath about the cliff hanger.

Becky is half demon AND the Patronus Legio thing and she STILL thinks Merton, Tate and Tommy are the freaks? *shakes head* whatever will you come up with next?

First class humour on this one. Tradition stuck and we find that Tate can't even kill Tommy with Silver Bullets. Prehaps that should signal him, he is not meant to kill Tommy. Too bad for ol' Freddy though, Tommy still in't dead, so he still has to listen to him. I like the Madonna referance at the end there too. Well done all round.

I forgot to add the traditions I love from your chapters.
1. Merton has the worst luck when it comes to falling things
2. Everyone tries to kill everyone else - you mentioned that yourself when Merton was counseling Tommy after the whole turned demon thing. and for now
3. Everyone has died or nearly died - Tommy (past disturbed), Tate, Merton (I think)...
This chapter reminded me of it when Mara's body falls knocking Merton over.
oh and while were're on that subject:
4. All spells Alyson preforms are well... kind of other dimension-y Only the spells to fix her spells work, even then...

yay, I can review properly again. Okay for the last 21 chapters:
I think I spoke a little too soon about the whole collage life thing, but I do know that in BWOC most of the stuff was centered around High School. Now I don't know much about Collage since I still go to high school (damn shame too since I'm bored) but shouldn't there be more of the Tommy trying to hide from his new pink loving roommate. So far we only have that one scene where Tommy first finds out his room mate loves pink and drives stick, well the way you described it he does, not sure if I ot the right idea though as my friends are all dodgy kinds and they have a bad influence on me.

I liked how Merton and Tommy switched bodies that onew time, it really goes to show how little Merton knew about Tommy's life and how hard it was for Tommy not to get caught up in his social circle just because he was a Jock.

I also like how you add little insecurities about their image and friendships into the story, you really are trying to relate them to normal teenagers, so sorry about my comment eairlier on not enough relation going on.

This chapter in particular is quite dark, whith all the possible death in it but I think you did really well with keeping all the characters in character and not making them do something different just because it is darker than the otheer chapters. I think Tate probably would have killed roboTate in order to sve Lori's life, but prehaps not Tommy's. Yet in all my English papers, we are told to study how the character changes throughout the story, so far Tate has gone from being hateful to helpful to insane and back to hateful to dead and back to hateful again. I think that the change at the moment is going back to helpful because he can't stand being lonely but he does not want to admit that he is feeling that way so he despratly clinges to anything that will let him stay the way he is because he does not believe that he deserves friends that would act so kindly to him when he has been so hateful to them and still he yearns to fit in.

Aww... Poor Tina...
Happy people, though! YAY!

I no want Lisa go bye-bye! WAH!
So sad... *Sniff*

LOL! This one was good.
"Where'd ya' get the sword?"

Why is the Order so mad at the team for failling at their missions? THEY NEVER HAD ANY MISSIONS! These people are infuriatingly incompetent. On a related note, I applaude you on your ability to keep Sarah in character without breaking your computer screen in a fit of rage.

Yay! I like this ending! Realy happy!

Holy What's-Celestial-think-of-Merton-now, Lupus!

Interesting batch of plot holes.

Merton was kinda' O.O.C. in the part where Alicia died. The group generaly tries to help save people, and if Merton watched somebody die, he'd be a little more frightened.

If only any of these characters actualy comprehended their own personalities.