i loved it. theres not much else to say. you are a truly amazing writer and i hope you keep it up.
;D

i love it...so sad...i always tend to cry when i read Lily/James fics with them dying in the end...

Oh, how nice! Great job!

Cool. Very good. I liked it.

hmm.. your right this fic did make little sense.. but i still really liked it. It just seemed...i dont know, but i do know i liked it!

such sadness yet insight...thank you

I like your style. Donnie Darko is great, so is this.

Loved the story very much. Was a great story!

DONNIE DARKO IS MY MOST FAVORITE MOVIE IN THE WORLD. -spaz- I love you and this story! Great work. You are in my favourite chart for life.

chilling. donnie darko is a truly amazing movie and this adaption was wonderful. i have never once thought about donnie darko and lily and james. never, so this was a truly amazing read. i especially like how you didn't give the marauders a 'special' friendship, with small things like peter. I was confused at first, merging lily with cherita but it worked out beautifully. especially so you included the letter and my favourite line "because there will be so much to look forward to." A wonderful adaption of the movie and the times you put in there, constantly were genius. I loved the "Tense silence. 27 seconds." and also the wonderful scene between donnie and his sister that you changed with Peter and Amy "You are such a **ass!" brilliant. OK I'm done ranting, that was a really great fic and just another comment on the spacing. BRILLIANT, really helps with the abstract ideas of it. congratulations and all the best. yas

wow.. that was intense. hehe.
very good fic. it was just as confusing as the movie. lol. = P* and a very good movie, might i add - one of my faves. ^^ and your sister wouldn't have donnie, i would. ; )
and no, the time thing wasn't annoying. it actually confused me at one point... hrm... lol.
but otherwise, very well written. = )
happy new year!

*) Aerandir (*

X Everyone dies alone. X

wow...
reminded me of Donnie Darco..everything about it..
and like the movie, it really makes you think...
Brilliant fic (although most of it obviously came from donnie darco!!)
very poetic...

holy **! that was one ** up story! makes you think. alot. i dont get the whole earmuffs thing, but it really does make you think.

WOW! That was powerful. Incredible story. I'd love to write more, but I just can't think of what to sa. This was a fantabulous, touching story.
--bri

Really good story. I really liked it, but theres;one thing: the time. I like it when the author puts time, but I think tht it was I bit to much, I mean with the minutes and everything. But except that, It was good