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Adrian Cavazos
2006-08-20
ch 9, anon.
abuseI really like this story Healing the Scars. I am glad that Helga was in it. I was not happy that Lila was in it. Lila is a stupid idiot who does not care about Arnold. I realize that now. I always knew that Lila was acting 'nice' to Arnold because she was taking advantage of him. Helga is the right person for Arnold. Helga G. Pataki is my favorite character. She is very sweet. Lila is a stupid, ignorant, hateful, person. Again, this is a great story. Helga Geraldine Pataki is #1 in my book of favorite Nick characters.
Nocturnal Outsider
2005-10-08
ch 9,
abuseWow! The second story I've read by you (about HA anyways) and I'm still lovin' it! I loved the sarcasm in this story and if you keep writing like this YOU'LL BE GOING PLACES! (Or maybe I'm just saying that cause I really, really love your stories). LOL
nena
2005-09-28
ch 9, anon.
abusei really liked yuor whole story. and that little bit of mystery in there was good, it kept me going. i thank you for your writting
Yardbird9
2003-11-20
ch 9,
abuseGood story!

The interaction between the characters was smooth and i liked the dialog too.

The ending was cute too.

Hm..."anxious to gaze at the night sky."

Sounds a little similar to how I ended one of my stories. But these type of endings were meant to be repeated. It always makes a good ending, no matter what.
FrozenJace
2003-11-15
ch 1,
abusei love this.
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2003-11-11
ch 4, anon.
abuseI know I know Lila is evil and is just using Arnold and Helga fought for him or sumting! Am I right well am I ??
?_?
2003-11-11
ch 3, anon.
abuseOhh so what she gonna act like huh huh huh?? Same ol Helga?
?_?
2003-11-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseI like sue Sue is the greatest! Hmm hope u dont mind me review every chappie.
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2003-11-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh my god! You're evil EVIL I say!!
serenity denied
2003-08-28
ch 9,
abuseThis story was so amazingly sweet! and I love how Lila's true manipulative personality was drawn out so well xD Well done!
beckie13
2003-07-11
ch 9,
abusegreat story and it all turned out ok.
beckie13
2003-07-11
ch 8,
abusegreat story so far
wyldheart
2003-07-03
ch 9,
abuseI'm so sorry I didn't read/review this story more frequently, but it was amazing! I loved the ending... it was so sweet! I can't wait to read more of your writing. :)
Skeye
2003-07-03
ch 9,
abuseI love it So cute that was a great end chapter
Akino Matoumiken
2003-07-03
ch 9,
abuseaw what a nice ending (^_^) a lil shorter compared to ur other chapter but that's ok... it's the content that counts (^_^)
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