 LadyGeri 2008-11-30 . chapter 11Oh girl.. I just discovered this story and I love it. I truly hope you have not abandoned it and will continue it soon. I'm adding it to my favorites and story alert. Please ...Please continue. It's great. |
 pepperikeys 2008-05-27 . chapter 10Please Please tell me this story isn't dead? Its wonderful so please update son...please?? |
 brakken 2008-05-10 . chapter 11What..no...No...NO! This can't be the last chapter from the last four years! It can't be! NO!
Ignore the pouting, but I'm so sad now...This was so hilarious, it's quite a tragedy you haven't finished it. I'll put it on my alerts anyway, just in case. ;)
If you're too busy to write it, I understand perfectly. Just know that this is awesome, and at least one person will send you a week's supply (at least) of coffee as a thank you.
Thank you for the beginning of this though, at the very least. And torturing Inuyasha so-it's quite entertaining, just like the rest, and Miroku's and Sango's parts in the intros and outros were a comedic stroke of genius. Well done. |
 brakken 2008-05-10 . chapter 10Is Anti-Hentai Man supposed to sound like Uncle Sam asking me to enlist? Because I just get these images of Uncle Sam with a crossed out lemon pin stuck to his hat, pointing his finger at me with the adage you've typed underneath him...It's quite compelling, who am I to be a bad patriot and not review? Anyway...
Hehe Inuyasha's just a tad more attracted to her than he lets on isn't he? My favorite line of this entire story so far:
"It'll go down! Just don't breathe, talk, or move much, and it will (bleep so ffnet doesn't get mad at me) go down."
Him whining...Hehe...Someone got off that night, even if it wasn't her...Wow I'm such a perv aren't I? But I do applaud Miroku's skill. |
 brakken 2008-05-10 . chapter 9I have to say, that was quite awesome. You got Kouga's perspective so well-not that many people do, especially in this context, instead focusing on Kagome's or Inuyasha's. Might just be what I'm reading lately, but that's my impression. Either way, great job with his character. I enjoyed it very much (Inuyasha's jealousy is also one of my favorite aspects of his personality, and you gave it full range here, thank you very much!). |
 brakken 2008-05-10 . chapter 8Very well done dream...So far your talent had manifested itself in the humor department quite wonderfully, but that was far from funny.
It was scary.
Well done with something different. |
 brakken 2008-05-10 . chapter 7Taisho is quite entertaining here...And I find it ironic beyond belief that Inuyasha actually did choose an appropriate best man for his wedding. I'm still waiting for Kagome and Inuyasha to discuss Sesshomaru's...less than typical appearance, ne?
So far though, I'm really enjoying this. I like the mix of absurd/funny and sincere/sweet/angsty. It keeps the story light, but still meaningful-a true romantic comedy. Just waiting for the romance... |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 6Well done. I was wondering how you'd pull off any kind of lime in this context-until this point you've had them holding hands, and it's clear that they were very, very uncomfortable with the idea. And yet...It worked. I guess having a few false starts then trying it out slow the first time helped. That girl is obscenely innocent-though it is amusing. Miroku's script was as corny (and hilarious) as it gets. |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 5This is so great...the images...Hojo with the cape...Inuyasha dragging out all the guests...the human 'best man' lying in the puddle of his own drool...Kagome whacking Inuyasha into the ground...You are so creative! And quite hilarious.
Only a few typos here and there, and you might want to know that it's not spelled fopa; it's faux paus (the French like to do stuff different/insane).
With no offense meant to the French. It's just hard to spell for English-speaking people like myself. |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 4That author's thing is too funny. I just took the AP Euro test today too...It's still on Friday afternoon. Hehe. Weird.
Anyways..I really enjoyed Kagome's confusion on Sesshomaru's gender...And the implications of Miroku's discussion with Inuyasha are pretty great too...Nice cliffie...I'd write more but I'm being glared at to finish up right now, so yeah. Sorry. |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 3I have a new favorite word. Sadomasochist. It's absolutely fabulous. Hojo's perspective is absurd, and quite funny. Somehow I get the feeling Inuyasha's not going to like him much when he meets him for the first time...Can't wait for that! |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 2I'm really enjoying the intro and outro bits to this...It's amazing how entertaining good hosting can be! And a prickly pear? Nice. Very nice. Too bad he's really a pomegranate in disguise. (You have to learn to like them, but once you do, there's no going back, you're addicted. Or maybe that's just my relationship with pomegranates...)But it's not like he'd admit to anything less than a prickly pear. A pineapple maybe, but that's possibly humorous so no. All good food for thought though... |
 brakken 2008-05-09 . chapter 1Hehe. I like it. This is really fun, I like the bit about the only thing saving Inuyasha's ego with his brother being that Sesshomaru looks like a girl. That got a laugh out of me. |
 Inuyasha420 2008-02-12 . chapter 11HAHAHAHA... Miroku finaly got his payment! And Sango too! (Grins evily) I wonder if I can do anything to help Rambler to get some type of payment too? (Insert evil laugh)BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Spots people looking at him through screen) AH! HOLY CRAP! Oh well, The great and almighty Rambling Coffee Addict has hopefuly been checking up on the reviews,(Mumbles under breath) if not then this is a waste of time. (Lightning flies out of screen and burns hand) OW! I gotta be more careful or I might end up with a Kazaana of my own! (Lightning strikes a few feet away) EEP! GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE! And please, please, PLEASE don't hurt me! |
 SWLTS 2007-12-27 . chapter 1 SORRY I MEANT "UPDATE! UPDATE!"
I got so nervous becuase it was my first review that I made mistake.
Man I' m such a dumdass.
my mistake my mistake
*crawls away in shame* |