Hurray for cheese! HUZZAH! Cheesies for everyone! (Throws cheese everywhere.)
Mario: Crap it. There she goes again.
Woohoo great fic!

Funny, exciting, and touching all at once! This was a great re-imagining of the Super Mario Bros. story. I'd love to see if you have any stories for where the Wario Brothers came from!

This first chapter is very sweet. And true to the nature of the Super Mario Brothers, it reminds me a lot of the relationship between my brother and myself. Our parents aren't dead (thank the Lord!), but I've definitely had my share of having to look after a little brother I disliked, and then becoming best friends with him years later.

I really love this story. It's a good example how Mario's and Luigi's life was before and how they get into Mushroom Kingdom :D Keep writing, NOW ^.^

Aw! I loved this story! I love all your stories! They're so great! One thing I noticed... did they ever go back and free those other prisoners...?

Geez...cheese lol Argh! I haven't memory problems! I can barely remember having read this. (Oh crap, hope Robin's not gonna kill me... -) N'way...umm it is sorta short in comparison to Jes's POD, but your brother brawl can't be beaten. ^^ A hail to Jes and Robin for the being the best brotherly drama writers!! Or whatever you call this. ^^

A masterpiece. *adds to favorite authors*

*anime waterfall tears* So sad...WAH! *cries hysterically*

Twas a tale for the ages [thankfully not an epic tale or no one would read pod =p] Actually I wish it WERE an epic tale because 4 chaps is just so short =[

Great story and I always love how you write Mario and Luigi... just the right amount of sibling rilvalry. You make them adorable and tough at the same time, the way only you can do.

Hats off to you Robin cause you are truly one talented author. [but your italics were all over the place what's the matter with you o.0;] Hehe just kidding, I just couldn't resist a little teasing =p

aw! *sniff* very sweet robin lee! I didnt think there was much cheese at all =D, hope theres gonna be more stories from you soon ^_~

This is really good. It's a nice take on the whole beginning to the Mario Brothers story. Nice job, keep up the good work.

It's all living up to reality! ^-^ Not actually having the goofy things happen. Ok. I'm not making any sense, do I? It's funny when they argue! But I never cease to love your episodes! ^^ heh, this is much more entertaining than "Three's A Crowd" but not as funny. Remember that one, Robin? ...GAH! What did you do?! Argh! I'm hanging on the cliff again!!(cliffhanger!) ^^

o the plot thickens! Aww Poor mario, hope hes ok =(, great job robin lee, its the only decent updated theres been for a while, i'll be looking forward to the rest =)

Wow so much action so great, this is the kind of epic story that I so much wanted pod to be but it fell short I am so glad that if I couldn't do it someone with a simalar vision of the Mushroom Kingdom could Robin... why did you have to go and get me hooked on another one of your awesome stories? (I swear one of these days you gotta get published somewhere)

"Think about the mess…whoo!" Man, I love your dialogue, Robin! Heehee! Not as good as your other chapters and stories, but the jokes and comdedy remain. Chapter 1 is the best one so far. Keep it up!