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ilovealias4ever 2008-08-01 . chapter 3
Oh please, some more. More. More!
r 2005-02-08 . chapter 3
one of my favorites. keep it comin! i've been looking everywhere to see if you updated!
CaRTeRsGrL518 2004-06-02 . chapter 3
Aww man, you cant leave us hanging like that! What's in the box?! Please, oh please, update soon!
JaneDoe07 2004-01-25 . chapter 3
Wow, I love this fic. I smiled the whole time I was reading it. Totally great. I love the characterization of Syd and Vaughn. PLease update soon!
Kate Halliwell 2003-11-04 . chapter 3
this is some really goos stuff (unlike certain people i know *glares at Sarkney lover* ) anyway its a fantastic story and keep it up! its going really well! will there be any more chapters?
mcanj25 2003-10-28 . chapter 3
LOVE IT! ABSOLUTLEY ONE OF MY FAVORITE PIECES EVER WRITTEN. REALLY! YOU SHOULD DEFINATLEY CONTINUE. IT'S LIKE I NEVER WANT THIS STORY TO END. KEEP GOING, I BEG YOU. EVERYTHING YOU'RE DOING IN THIS STORY, IS SO WELL WRITTEN AND SO RIGHT AND TRUE TO CHARACTER AND JUST OVERALL REALLY RALLY REALLY GOOD. PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!
sarah 2003-08-26 . chapter 3
i like youre story i hope you continue!
LilyoftheValley4 2003-08-15 . chapter 3
Dude, you've got Sydney and Vaughn doing the wild thing! An excellent turn of events. I also like how you mimicked the Joey's Pizza thing, even if it was Gino's pizza. Oh, and I have one of those Japanese boxes, I don't know if it has twenty-seven secret opening's, but it's got something like it. Man, was it fun to try and figure out; it was an awesome present for Sydney to get Vaughn. Add-on to your story soon!
LilyoftheValley4 2003-08-15 . chapter 3
Dude, you've got Sydney and Vaughn doing the wild thing! An excellent turn of events. I also like how you mimicked the Joey's Pizza thing, even if it was Gino's pizza. Oh, and I have one of those Japanese boxes, I don't know if it has twenty-seven secret opening's, but it's got something like it. Man, was it fun to try and figure out; it was an awesome present for Sydney to get Vaughn. Add-on to your story soon!
London 2003-08-10 . chapter 3
I was so happy to see an update to this story! I love it! Please post again asap. :-)
megvaughn2003 2003-08-10 . chapter 3
Very good! Can't wait for more.
rossandrachelforever 2003-08-10 . chapter 3
omg!! this story is so amazing! you absolutely have to continue this... you're killing me here. you are such a great writer and you have to continue. definitely one of my favortie stories that i have ever read!!
barbara
kate 2003-07-13 . chapter 2
Wow, very highly delicious. I've not read many Alias fanfictions (mostly because there really aren't that many of them, or at least that many GOOD ones) but this is my favorite to date!! I like reading a little bit of light-hearted smut and this was just the ticket! Thanks, hope to see more soon.
Vaughn's Jenn 2003-06-07 . chapter 2
Otter... OTTER! Where are you? I'm dying for another installment of this story? What happened to "i have plenty of ideas for future installements... and each of them will be smuttier than the next"? I NEED THOSE FUTURE INSTALLMENTS.

I think that this is such a beautifully written, wonderful great perfect story and i need the S/V. I crave the S/V. I will give you the patents to all my stories for another chap... well no. But write the next one please? for my sanity. Not that i have any.

But this is a perfect plot with the perfect mixture of smut, wit, and coolness that totally pervades ALIAS.

I'm hoping that a long review will spur you to write the next chapter. But i mean it. This is a gem of a fic, you are a great writer, it's calling to you, killing all of us.

If you're trying to build up suspense, it worked.

If you're looking for inspiration, here's a tip: write the first word. Then the next. Maybe an adjective. A dialogue? Word after word after word... and there will be the chap! Maybe i should follow my own advice instead of starting more fics but what can i say? I'm a hypocrite.

PLEASE keep going.

I'm loving this (if you can't tell).

~Jennifer Vartan //wink//
Bethany 2003-06-06 . chapter 2
This is a really good story i can't wait till i can read more. Can't wait to see what is in the box.
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