That was. . .odd. Sorry, I guess it's just i've never been scared of thunderstorms or something, and then the whole harry thing messed me up a bit..a well, it was still a fun read.
-The Lovely Lioness

That was really sweet

Aw how sweet!

i like this fic, especially the beginning and the parts describing the storm. you didn't state when this happened though... not that that mattered much. oh, but the ending's a bit anti-climax. :)

Augh, scary, scary.But then sweet. Almost fluffy. Nice contrast of emotions. Still, the ending is a bit unrealistic. Nice fic, though.

aw! that was so cute.

beckie:)

WOW WOW WOW!
that was a bit quick no? Oh well, much too quick!
However, even if the idea is done and redone, it is always cute.
I think you can do better than that. You can stick to the story, but you should develop more "your" characters. That's my personnal point of view, but I love characters fully developped and long story... sorry!
I hope you did understand me, even if I have a bloody English!
bye bye!

cute and quick