 Sev'sLittleWriter 2009-10-17 . chapter 1beautiful. |
 RebelShay 2009-08-20 . chapter 1I love it!
Are you gonna continue? :D |
 Algor Nox 2009-04-06 . chapter 1Quite good. I thought at first that Professor Snape was put in Azkaban for having carnal relations with a student, but then I thought he might be dead. Was I right with either one? Is there going to be another chapter? |
 Edlyn Velda 2008-06-08 . chapter 1oh man that was sad!
good sad. |
 MadBrilliant1880 2008-03-20 . chapter 1sad! |
 fransisca 2007-04-04 . chapter 1 Great Fic!
Loved how you wrote Hermione and her thoughts and interaction with Harry and Ron.
I love the last line how it shows how she feels without actually writing it down literally. |
 dancingfirefly124 2007-03-30 . chapter 1This is very sad and sweet. Nicely done. |
 lipasnape 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Well done. Your story is recd at the Know-It-Alls site, and they are doing a really good job. |
 Lady Catriona-Arre 2006-03-01 . chapter 1that was so cool. i hope you don't dread this. i read your profile and i totally agree. people read like slash and raqpefics and whatever else. i read one once where lucius malfoy was having an affair involving a pile of mashed potato and too much spandex. ugh, lets not go into that. i love hermione and snape fics too. but i can't write them, anyway sorry this is so long, but i loved your fic it was awesome (but sad too) |
 ashtrail 2005-11-17 . chapter 1that was beautifully written. i like how you described hermione's feelings. i wonder if that's it or are you going to add more to it? hope you do, coz i would really love to read it. thanks for sharing.. |
 Clever Lass 2005-11-17 . chapter 1 No time to login, sorry, but just had to tell you what a great setup this is.
Problem is, I can't tell whether it's a cliffie of a oneshot, or an edge-of-the-chair beginning of a longer story?
Either way, I liked your characterizations, particularly Harry and Hermione. Ron is a prat, as usual. :) And I have to respect any author who writes about Holmes too. He's awfully Snapey, don't you think? Or maybe Snape is rather Holmesian. Either way, it's an interesting start. If you do continue it, I'd love an email letting me know. Thanks. |
 Bambu 2005-08-22 . chapter 1Considering the date that you wrote this and how little was known about Snape's character at that time, this is wonderfully written... and with such consideration for Hermione's age, inexperience, and her lack of relationship with Snape. Well done. |
 Shada Bay 2004-12-29 . chapter 1I found this very, very well written. I love how you are able to fiction-multitask; you've got Harry and Hermione carrying on their own little conversation, but Ron is still talking on in the background, while Dumbledore is awaiting his owl -- sorry, raven -- everything just fits together so smoothly.
And your choice of words is quite excellent. |
 Natsuyori 2004-10-31 . chapter 1Excellent! U wonder why this review comes so late. its because I got it from someone's profile |
 Violet Blues 2004-10-23 . chapter 1Why are you ashamed to say the song is from the 'A Walk To Remember' soundtrack? *looks confused*
Anyway, nice story. |