 ashes at midnight 3/13/10 . chapter 12I liked how Buffy and Angel reacted to the candy, halerious |
 Marcus S. Lazarus 5/17/09 . chapter 12Oh yeah…
Just what we needed in a series as dark as this- Buffy and Angel spent thirty years in HELL; can’t get much darker than that-; the obligatory ‘comedy’ episode that Joss seems to give us at least once a season in all his shows (By which I mean an ep where the crisis is more humorous than anything else even if an element of danger remains).
The character of Danielle Burg in particular makes for an interesting addition to the cast in regards to wondering about her own agenda- what does the Mayor have to gain by providing Buffy with a tutor?-, but what REALLY makes this story stand out is Faith’s opportunity to serve as the group leader for a change.
Where she was always on the side in the show at this point, here she is truly called upon to be THE Slayer, and she copes with the challenge very well.
Plus, hey; we get to see a bit of Angel’s inner Liam come through while under the influence of the band candy; even if he’s slightly… tweaked… by Angel’s demonic temper, what’s not to like about the chance to see the one part of Angel’s old identity we rarely EVER get to witness in action?
And the finale…
As always, the seeds are sown for a VERY interesting continuation; keep it up! |
 Honey-B 10/9/03 . chapter 12 hey, I've just finished reading the series- so far, anywya,- and figured the least I could do was review. So, you're writings fantastic, and I've love the way you've set this up, especially how you've managed to incorporate real episodes. um... just two things that I could find wrong, sometimes you don't put Q marks on Q's, and isn't Acathla spelt, well, like that, and not Akathler? I'm not sure. Anyway, long reveiw, but it was just so good!
B |
 Queen Boadicea 7/31/03 . chapter 12I know I've read this before now so I won't review it here. I'd be gratified if you finished this series soon. I haven't checked in at the other site-you know, the one with the graphics. Have you finished it there or should I just keep checking in on ff.net? |
 Lucy Maimkill 7/20/03 . chapter 11YES YES YES FINALY FF.NET IS WORKING!I have so much to catch up on.
I liked how Faith took control of the situation.I guess Slayers truly are leaders, the General's in battle.
Sith. |
 astacia 7/11/03 . chapter 10 Wonderful as usual. Please do update soon. I absolutely love this story. |
 Lucy Maimkill 7/11/03 . chapter 10Hehehehehehehhe...I can't wait for the fight scene *grins*..its going to be wicked.
Sith. |
 Lucy Maimkill 7/7/03 . chapter 9Ew..rightly said that Snyder coming onto Joyce IS deeply disturbing!
*Grins* i like the part where Angel, Buffy, Faith and Giles "convinced" Ethan Rayne *snickers* just hot it SHOULD have been in the actually episode.
Sith. |
 tefla 6/26/03 . chapter 8 Oh, never mess with Cordelia. Now there is a line I thought I'd never say .. er .. type.
Great job so far Philip. Keep it up. |
 Lucy Maimkill 6/26/03 . chapter 8LOL.Go Cordelia!And i somehow can not find it in my soul to feel bad or sorry for Xander.*eats some more ice-cream* i thought it was a great chapter, and i hopemore is up soon.Keep typing and writing.
Sith |
 astacia 6/17/03 . chapter 6 I finally found you again. I read a while back up to Excedo Inferi #4 and then couldn't find it for a long time. I just spent the last couple of days going back over everything. I absolutely love this story. You are a wonderful writer. It's so great that you've gotten your book published. Can't wait for more. Update soon. |
 Lucy Maimkill 6/14/03 . chapter 6Dude very nice chapter...But evil Buffy and Angel..not good.Although very entertaing.
Sith. |
 Divamercury 6/14/03 . chapter 6Oh, me. What will happen now? Will Xander succeed or end up getting killed by Buffy and Angel? What's up with Joyce and Giles, as if I didn't already know, and will the rest of the Scooby Gang be able to stop it? Guess I'll have to stay tuned, but I SO don't want to wait very long. Please continue soon!
DM |
 ktslayer 6/4/03 . chapter 5Love your story! Very funny, keep it up!
KT |
 tefla 6/3/03 . chapter 5 Oh, I was right. It seems that Buffy and Angel have been affected by the candy bars. I can't wait to see what else happens. I wonder who will stop the chaos. Faith maybe? |