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| Ishizu 2005-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are one of the best authors in this yugioh fanfiction site! I have read all your stories that pertains to the Negative realm, and you have the perfect balance between drama, angst, and action. You must continue writing and finish Negative Chaos!! I am also an author myself, and I'm pretty far along. When I am done, I'll upload it. Hope you never lose your inspiration, and may the muse's power be with you.(no offense, but could you bleep out some of the curses? You don't have to, I'm just asking) |
| trefenwyd12 2003-12-30 ch 1, | abusethis was good, but it confused me. keep writing!! |
| Chan 2003-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWH!! Poor Kawari... ;-; (Wow, it's taken me a LONG time to read this fic! O_o...) It's a good thing he's okay again now! Huzzah for Yugi! *runs around in circles* |
2003-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abusePoor guy. Ryou seems more lucid than he appeared in "Shadow Turned Light," but he was in a lot of pain when he appeared. |
| Wingleader Sora Jade 2003-04-14 ch 1, | abuse^__^ Angst is fun. You write it really well too! Better then me anyway... Aww... Kawaii Kawari. :p What about AMane? You said she was still alive... OO; Random thought: Is his mother still alive too, since everything's reversed?? Another random thought: you should do a one-shot/side-story where Ryou (True Ryou) gets pulled to the NR and sees Amane again. :p Then he thinks its a dream or something... :p I always liked Amane, which is strange since you never actually see her in the manga, and she's not in the anime at all... But then again, I've always liked obscure characters. :p My favorite Gundam Wing chara is Chang Meiran, and she's dead too!! *giggles* Ersh, I'm rambling again... Okay, I'll leave you alone now. Buh-bye! *runs off to cuddle her NR Bishie plushies* |
| Magical Mage 2003-04-09 ch 1, | abuseMage: That was... Tokyo: CREEPY! *shudders in fear* Mage: Not really...just made me wonder about the human mind. So I say this was more psychological than angst...since it examians the mind Tokyo: Still...it freaked me out...I want to keep my mind *Holds his head protectively* Mage: and that's supposed to help how? Tokyo: If my mind leaves then I can catch it Mage: *all werided out* okay...I'm just going to hit the 'submit review' button now. |
| Silver Fang's Revenge 2003-04-08 ch 1, | abuseTis I, your loyal fan! Poor Ryou :( That was kinda intresting though. (NR Ryou looks at Sliver funny) What? :D It's intresting to hear all of the sides of the story. |
| aibou2 2003-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAibou: ;_; I think I'm going to cry. Suma: -_- Oh god. ::plugs ears:: Aibou: WAH! ::clings to Kawari:: That was so sad! *sniff* Kawaisou! ::cries:: Suma: Now that I think of it, Kaeru never DID find Kawari... Aibou: ^_^ WAI!! Yugi did!! ::hugs Yugi:: OO This mini fic thingy was really good!! ^_^ I liked the ending the best: the little hide and seek thing. OO;; And the last sentence stood out the most. OO Creepyness. oo;; I don't think I could imagine Ryou grinning insanely though. OO Scary. ::hugs Kawari:: WAI!! Write more!! ::hugs HCG:: ^.~ Suma: -_-;; And get some kind of shield between Aibou and Kawari, before she hugs him to near-death. Again. XX;; |