 Pigglet 2009-11-16 . chapter 18LOVE IT AND HOPED YOU HAD A GREAT BIRTHDAY!, I AM AN JUNE BABY TWO. |
 hpgirl4ever 2009-09-21 . chapter 18Amazing story, I loved reading how it got better with each chapter. Loved the ending, and can't wait for tommorow, well I guess later today seeing as to how it's two a.m., to read the sequal! Again, Loved it! =D |
 littlemissgooddy2shoes(me) 2009-07-23 . chapter 14 I am really enjoying this but why is harry taking a nap before dinner? In fact, why so much sleep? Can a person really sleep so much? It's strange, but overall the story is great. |
 Angel-Jin 2009-07-10 . chapter 18Will you be my new sister? PLEASE! ;3 |
 CrayonsPink 2009-06-24 . chapter 18FANTASTIC job!! Loved it! |
 moriah93ohio 2009-05-25 . chapter 18Yay! Great story!
I really loved it. I wish I could have read the full lemon but I am not sure where to read it on.
I am really glad that Harry is pregnant! I can't wait find out if it will be a boy or a girl. I hope that it's a girl.
I am so reading the sequel tomorrow. Or later on today.. whatever... same thing.
Again, I love this story!
Until then... |
 Marie Clause 2009-04-15 . chapter 2 I feel like Draco shouldn't be so acceptiong. |
 Scarred Rose'99 2009-03-08 . chapter 2I'm gonna criticize a bit now:
1. Draco and Harry don't seem fully in character to me. There should be at least some of the sarcastic nature of Draco's in the first few chapters. And Harry should have a bit more of a temper or something like that.
2. And you need to paragraph more. Currently they are really really long. And most readers don't like that too much. It would be better if there were more.
3. Ron and Hermione should also be more in character. Ron should have that short-temper of his, and Hermione needs to be more like her bookworm self.
Your fic is really good. But I think these improvements will help you a lot. |
 smallvillewanabe4561 2009-01-03 . chapter 18i love it so much. i think this was wonderfully written. |
 smallvillewanabe4561 2009-01-03 . chapter 14How big is this dragon? To me, it sounds like the size of a golden retriever , german shepard, labador etc. you know what I mean? |
 yumi2482 2008-12-19 . chapter 18wow. nice. do you know anymore stories that are harry draco or have magical creatures in it like the hole veela mating thing that are good |
 EverChangingObsessions1973 2008-11-29 . chapter 18Well that is nice. I must say that in true this story kind of dragged on. But it's whatever, it was still a nice read.
-Animefreakchelsea |
 EverChangingObsessions1973 2008-11-29 . chapter 16Aw! So sweet! It is coming to a close quite nicely.
-Animefreakchelsea |
 EverChangingObsessions1973 2008-11-29 . chapter 15Well this chapter was nice. I liked Fafner (though not the name) I would want tone. XP
-Animefreakchelsea |
 EverChangingObsessions1973 2008-11-29 . chapter 14Cute.
Not much to say...im a bit tired...
I like the dragon thought it is EXTREAMELY RANDOM!
O.O...whats it's name?
'-Animefreakchelsea |