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Reviews For: Eternal City, Crystal Tokyo - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

Vld
2008-10-08
ch 45,
abuseAlita... as in Battle Angel Alita? Or, in Japan, Gally? from Gunnm? She rocks! And since Rebby has probably been dead for eons, is Jo related to her? Apart from being a mix of teh character.
Any chance to see Roberta or Eda's successors? Or ShenHua! Just let the Freaks Brigade from Roanapur come out and play.
And Armitage is in the right place. Roanapur suits her greatly, given her past. What about her daughter? She still alive?

Oh, and Cyber is wrong. Naomi has seen it before. Usually, she withdrew and started shooting almost immediately.
NeonProdigy
2008-10-08
ch 45,
abuseIt's odd that two days after I start reading the Black Lagoon manga, you put Roanapur in this fic. Looking forward to next chapter, I'm interested in this Jo/Revy fusion you've introduced.

...and yes, I'll admit, I started reading Black Lagoon after I first learned of Balalaika. She is a Sexy Scarred Badass.
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-05
ch 44,
abuseTypo: while her parents were away, know she was a military officer and warrior.

How does Hotaru "see" that a drink is colored ginger ale rather than something alcoholic? A special power of the Senshi? *grins*

Tis a very fun series, I hope you continue it!
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-05
ch 43,
abuseDon't know if you care but...

Typo: “Mai!” a voice yelped happily and she grinned as Mikoto Minagi hurried up the street, the black haired woman’s black hair tied in a braid.

It seems like poetic justice that Mikoto wound up appearing older than Mai. *grins* And it does fit rather well that Mai died and then came back as an energy being.

But I would have expected Tomoyo to insist on carrying their child! At least the first one. Unless she is too busy guarding Sakura and her Cards...
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-05
ch 42,
abuseSo the Amazons found a way to do completely without men, excellent! *laughs*

This bit: “And,” Yuji added, “adherents of the Saotome school of Anything Goes martial arts randomly dunk themselves in a spring as a test to see if they can cope with the cursed form.”
Is going a bit far, but tis still worth a smile and a shake of the head.

Nadeshiko and Jun seemed like a real odd couple until I remembered that Jun's first love was gentle and sweet just as I image a daughter of Tomoyo and Sakura to be. And then I would expect Nadeshiko to have Magic as her parents have, which may come in handy some time.
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-04
ch 41,
abuseAlways sweet to see Tomoyo and Sakura. Still favorites of mine after all these years. And the idea of Tomoyo getting Yue's power and youth was an excellent one...
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-04
ch 35,
abuseIt's good to see Ran's hatred thawing a bit.
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-04
ch 31,
abuseGood chapter! It's Good to see Jun opening up a bit finally.
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-04
ch 29,
abuseSakura was able to make Cards so either she made them for Nadeshiko or Nadeshiko inherited enough power to make her own. I like the thought that Nadeshiko made her own...
Teresa Kaiju
2008-08-04
ch 27,
abuseFun to read as always. Seems like an unusually good chapter for some reason. Or maybe it's just because I haven't read any of this for a long time...
Vld
2008-07-28
ch 43,
abuse... there goes my dream of an Alysa/Miyu/Nao pairing... *sniffle* Oh well, can't have everything now, can I? And that answers part of my former question. Now for the second part: does she still have Kagutsuchi? And by extension, does Mikoto still summon Miroku?
Vld
2008-07-28
ch 42,
abuseWOOHOO! I love Satoshi's work! Especially Plastic Little! How about having Tita and her blonde (don't remember her name) make an appearance?
Vld
2008-07-28
ch 37,
abuseLet's see... Usagi's piggish eating habits and Minako's acting like a brat... That sure calls back some old memories. Now, all that's needed is Rei snapping at Usagi about proper manners, Ami being the voice of reason and Makoto calmly enjoying the show... then again, she couldn't really enjoy it when she was the target to Minako's teasing.
And Ami and Rei are probably walking on eggshells to rebuild their relationship with their daughter, so... not surprising.
I liked that.
Vld
2008-07-28
ch 36,
abuseIs Mai able to summon Kagutsuchi again? And how come she's immortal? Though I like the idea, she's the first one who's longevity has yet to be explained. (I know, she just appeared in the story) Are there other Himes alive right now? maybe some Otomes as well?
Vld
2008-07-27
ch 29,
abuseAnd apparently she's named after her grandmother. So, her cards are not Clow cards. Are they Sakura cards or did she create her own?
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