  Ugh 2007-02-15 . chapter 1 This is terrible.
Have you any idea what the caharacters are like? This is FANFICTION so it would be nice to se at least one Ranma character show up. So far you have butchered every character in Ranma1/2 for no real reason.
Please don't write anymore until you've read the manga. |
  Kamen Rider Den-O 2006-01-07 . chapter 2Great story. |
| Kamen Rider Den-O 2006-01-06 . chapter 1 Great story. |
| wen.but for love 2005-10-02 . chapter 2 Same, really, on this one. It has great potential, and it would be a waste if you abandoned it. It's true, though, that school and all should be dealt with first. Your next big break is end of the year? |
| Zen Aku 2005-08-24 . chapter 2 Please Oh plaese update soon, I been dying to see the next chapter. |
| Bobboky 2005-05-13 . chapter 2 pretty good |
| Daniel Shinigami 2005-03-19 . chapter 1 Isn't the Pia Carrot some hentai game? |
| why is that the title anyway? 2004-09-21 . chapter 2 update! continue! please? |
| blood 2004-05-02 . chapter 2 uhh...what is the other anime here? i'm not familiar with this...update soon! |
 dogbertcarroll 2004-01-17 . chapter 2Too many plot holes. |
| dogbertcarroll 2004-01-17 . chapter 1 Two words. Cause & Effect.
You skip details and have characters act
suprised at what they already knew to be true.
Akane and Ryoga aren't THAT bad. At times they
do approach that point tho'. |
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