Oh my gosh. The emotions just cut to the heart. Keep up the writing! You have a wonderful story with characters true to themselves. The plot is believable and suspenseful. Everything is going right as far as the writing goes. Congrats! Don't give up! You've got several more chapters til the end! And at least one faithful reader right here to gobble them up.

Everything sounds peachy right now...but I cheated and peeked ahead. Things aren't so peachy right now.

Story developing very nicely. I like it.

See, this is one of those stories that make me lean towards being a G/C shipper. Well done! Nice balance of shippiness and action.

Well, at least he told her. Still sounds good to me! Sounds like the plot is thickening!

oo-ooh. Now what is Grissom gonna do? Sounds like his family's in trouble.

wow, this has been really interesting. very in character, for the most part. i'm very interested to see how this ends, and how the G/C relationship progresses. please keep updating, you're doing great!

Man, if you want some angst, this is the fic to read. Just how I like it. ;) :) This is awesome. I love how Catherine is being there for him through all of this, and I love how Grissom is trying to hide it all. In the words of Warrick, "Just like Grissom." Very awesome. Well written.

UPDATE!

Please continue this... It's simply not fair to leave it hanging when it was getting so exciting. I really liked the way Maggie and Lindsey were penpals.

Oh my gosh! Whoa whoa whoa. Yikes. They're gonna die! Well... maybe not. :P ;) I hope not, for Grissom's case. This is so awesome! Yay for Catherine and Jim being the reasonable ones right now. Good stuff. :D I can't wait for more!

Props to Catherine for being there for Grissom. Man, what an awesome friend. Whew. There are so few people out in the world like that. Great job with this fic. I'm more and more intrigued every time you update this. Update again soon! :D I'm loving it!

Excellent!

Oh my god! this is such a good story! I hope u continue with it very soon!!

I feel sorry for Grissom and what's happening to him it was so nice of Cathy to try comforting him.

I hope that they get Grace and Maggie back safely so that Grissom and Maggie could start living like father and daughter not uncle and niece.

Keep up the great work!!

this is great so far! You've created some really interesting characters and they integrate perfectly with the CSI characters.

I love the mystery and I love how Gil is dealing with his feelings.

Can't wait for more.

-Kat

OMG. you totally need to finish this. Chapter six cannot be the end. I need more.
And while your at it i need your help. How do you get the spacing correct. I have tried everything and i cant get it? thanks.