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| John Duhh 2006-08-02 ch 4, | abuseomg i cant believe your just going to leave me hanging?! AHH! |
| Deathly Noted 2005-04-10 ch 4, | abuseOh, lovely! This fanfic is absolutely wonderful! Seifer and Quistis are so adorable together... and you have a great sense of humor; this whole story really cracked me up... and you have Zell's character down PERFECTLY, so he was the funniest of all. You could also evoke a sad, dramatic mood when needed, though, which is quite a talent - most writers are either always very funny or very morbid and can't blend both together effectively. I'm not such a big fan of the action/adventure stuff in fanfics, because it is generally pretty boring to me, but you did an okay job with it and didn't make me want to claw out my eyes or anything, which action sequences in fanfiction often makes me want to do. I hope you move back to more romantic/comedic/angsty things soon, though; they are much more interesting to read about! Please update soon! ^_^ Actually, after looking at the dates on this fanfic, it seems you haven't updated for over a year! O.O; That really saddens me... I mean, this is such a good fanfic, and I'd really like to see what happens in the end... I honestly love this story, I really do! You should seriously consider coming back and finishing this, because it's really depressing to see a good fanfic like this die, especially when there aren't many other fanfics this good out there. You have at least one fan that'd be overjoyed if you updated, eh? :D |
| The Cowgirl 2004-11-14 ch 4, anon. | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this fic, its fantastic and i wanna know wot happens next. I'm beging! |
| LadyImaldris 2004-09-25 ch 2, | abuseImagining Squall drunk is quite amusing! This chapter is good too, I am adding it to my Favortie Stories list, because I just think its awesome. ~LiNeerthrae Torana |
| LadyImaldris 2004-09-25 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting chapter... this story could definitely go places. I see you haven't updated in a while... I don't know if this story is finished yet, but I encourage you to try and continue it if the other chapters are anything like this first one. Your use of narration through the characters' personal reflections and feelings is good. It makes the emoitions running rampant in the minds of Quistis, Seifer, and the rest easier to understand. Well done I must say, well done. |
| Qui-ti 2004-06-18 ch 4, | abuseWHE! UPDATE UPDATE! YAY! FLUFF! ^_^ |
| Qui-ti 2004-06-18 ch 3, | abuseCRAP! WHAT HAPPENED?!?!?! NO! |
| Qui-ti 2004-06-18 ch 2, | abuseLol, I can imagine Squall and Zell drunk singing karaoke... *sigh* Seifer drunk would be so sexy... ah. ^_^ |
| Qui-ti 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abusePoor Seifer! Lol, you like Kuwabara? He's very fab. But yeah. Nice ficcy start... poor Seifer. But Quistis DOES know what it's like to be unwanted! THERE'S NO ONE THERE FOR HER BUT SEIFER! AHH! Gone insane. Be back in a bit. |
| Shogo Kawada 2004-03-29 ch 4, | abuseGreat story, but I and everyone else has been waiting for the fifth chapter FOREVER, so update soon please. I also like the idea for that series Samurai Caliber. Keep up the good work! |
| stainedangel 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWTF?!?! OMG, WRITE MORE.. DO IT OR SUFFER MY WRATH!... No but really, I love this. Great story, interesting. I give it two thumbs and two big toes way up. |
| none 2004-03-21 ch 4, anon. | abusevery very good good story!u must finish it! please?!?!?!?!? well l8ter den ps u can call me amidamaru |
| DisturbedVenus 2004-03-15 ch 4, | abuseoh no!not a cliffhanger X.X |
| looney_lass 2004-03-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseWOW!, what a cliffhanger eh?lol =p Zell was such a hero, when he came to help quistis!*swoon* |
| Teri Baumer 2004-02-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat Great GREAT! I love it so far, and can't wait to see what happens next. I wanna see some more romance and heat between Seifer and Quistis! And thank you for pairing up Irvine and Selphie! They are the cutest couple ever! YAYS! |