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| x-starbuck 2006-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is my fave eames/goren fic I've ever read. It seems you've put a huge amount of work into it. I could *not* stop laughing, I LOVED IT. I felt a bit sorry for Eames in the end, but I still loved it. Please do a sequel! I wouldn't want to get on your badside around April Fools :-p you must be able to come up with the best pranks ever. :-p - Chrissy |
| Naomi 2005-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know this should be a 'well-rounded' critique, but in all honesty, I can't think of a darned thing wrong with it. This story put a grin on my face right from the start through to the end, and I'm still grinning. The premise is original, the telling of the story is very nicely done - you write it in such a way that I could picture the story unfolding in my mind the whole way through. And, you have a wicked sense of humour! I would love to see a post-script to this. From the moment when Goren was 'shot', I kept thinking, she is going to draw and quarter him for this one. You really pulled of a brilliant coup with this story. |
| saint_moro 2004-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it - especially the latin! I once did latin at school but had to give it up :( Those two really ripped in to each other, didn't they? I loved Eames' panick attack in the interrogation room. A very enjoyable fic... unbelievable yes, but that didnt take anything away from the story. |
| Abby 2004-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this story! You're a talented writer, and you seem to know the characters very well. It was very funny! |
| Fuzzy Angel 2003-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, Riverstar! Wow, such a wonderful chapter, is there more going to be up? Cause I want more!! Oh btw, can you please give me an update? Thankies :D Love the story! Keep it up! Farrah aka Fuzzy Angel |
| Amelia 2003-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abusewow good fic ;p love amelia |
| S. E. Holmes 2003-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI really, really hope you're going to continue this. I loved it a lot. If I was Alex, I'd be POed right now. But anyway. I loved the Latin phrases, which I shall print and tack on my door. |
| CJSpooks 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseOh my God! This was the most amusing story...It was hilarious! The use of Latin was cute too. GREAT WORK! |
| Kiera Kingsley 2003-04-21 ch 1, | abuse*gets up from falling off her chair and rolling on the ground laughing* A sequel? You'd better write a sequel--or I'll get Goren to come after you! LOL, j/k--but please continue! :D |
| Jackson 2003-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome! I enjoyed it so much! It was really so cute and funny. |
| gaga 2003-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abusedo more fan fic that was really good,really funny to please |
| anonymous 2003-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story..hope you write a sequel!! |
| Fashionably Stupid 2003-04-11 ch 1, | abuseYet another fine work, m'dear. I believe you and I use the same Latin phrase resource, am I right? If not, the translation is impeccable! Please keep the stories coming. They are ever an inspiration. |
| emily3147 2003-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei REALLY loved this fanfic!! it ranks rite up with my top 5! it was very good! |
| L.McGonagall 2003-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseEgo sum in amore Latin! I love this story . Please write a sequel or epilouge or something to countinue it. |