:D the cuteness! haha you should write more :)

Haha...this is good. You actually performed this? I hope you got an A; it was definately amusing! They sound like they hate each other! It's great!

OMG! that was so funny! i demand more! no ill be nice. only if you WANT 2. and believe me u want 2.LOL. good very good. now since i read urs go read mine...its short i promise. lol bye

yes! way to make fun of the balcony scene! whoo! ^-^

LOL, this was hilarious.

That was one of the greatest things I've ever read...I was laughing so hard my mother heard me in the other roomed and came to find out what happened..then she read it and started laughing...then I read it to a friend over the phone..and she found it histarical..and it became much funnier cause she has this squealing laugh that just added to my laughter..lol..so..anyway..now I'm babbling..love the story..you should do shakespears "As you like it"...that was to funny...

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Funny. But I'd advise you to remove what you had Juliet said about cursing.

Oi. I actually fond this to be quite amusing. Romeo and Juliet finally behaving like the young adolescent teengers that they are.

omg that was so freakin funny. especially the part when the squirrels threw the acorns at romeo. that cracked me up. PLEASE make more.