Me again, I loved your ending! It made me so sad, especially since I really do love this pairing even though Zechs often makes me want to kick his butt. Or pair Noin up with someone else just to spite him. Which I have done, with surprisingly good results though I still like this pairing the best.

This also flowed better than your first chapter and the imagry was just as good, very well done. So keep up the good work and hope to see more of your work soon!

Ah...a nearly naked Zechs...it doesn't really get much better than that, does it?

Very good description here, I especially like her dress and oh so sexy intentions towards our handsome Ice prince.

Also, just a small critique, you need to work on your timing a little when it comes to your lyrics in between paragraphs. In soem places it just didn't flow well and distrupted the over all feel of the chapter.

it was nice...but the sex was a bit too short though...but, seriously, it was great!

*sob*

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I love the song, i love your fic, i too love Zechs. There isn't much to say now that all praises had been sung by your ealier reviewers... i'll only be repeating them otherwise.

A very insightful "romance" fic... the very type i like to read but never seem to find. i'm glad i came around to find and read your fic.

Thank you.

Jovial~UnHolyIllusions~

*sob*

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really cool fic!..you have no idea how much i love Zechs x L Noin fics!...cant wait to read the rest
Ja Ne R.D.master

WOW! *gets all teary eyed
i absolutely love it!! i can say no more for if i did you would spend hours reading about how much i liked it.

i must say you stopped at a really good part! and i love the way your write. its so captivating.

That was absolutly fabulous (Sorry for the bad spelling, I pulled an all nighter and got only 1/30 hr./min sleep) But any-who, that story was awsome. Keep on wrighting, and you'll be a wrighter some day.

Wright/right on! ^-^;

i love it. ur an awsm writer!

Nice fic! Your talent is blatently obvious and I hope you keep writing forever!

Beautiful... I loved it. You're very talented. :)

I really hope that whatever is happening to cause you to have such a bad month clear up. I can't wait for the next chapter! Zechs is so sexy!

Argh! *throws pillow at ericedwyn's head and misses horribly* you're cruel!! *sighs heavily in defeat* love story. Please continue SOON!

the story is really sweet, I wish you good luck!
Sonia

I'll wait until you come out with more. Your stories are worth it.